
7/19/2004 c1
19Phelan Kell
This alsmost made me smile it was so dark... of course, you couldn't see it because of the giant shadow created by this poem. I love it nontheless! Now I have to go get a flashlight...

This alsmost made me smile it was so dark... of course, you couldn't see it because of the giant shadow created by this poem. I love it nontheless! Now I have to go get a flashlight...
6/26/2004 c1
13hauntingtheliving
. get outta meh mind. Kidding. But its awesome \m/. keep up the awesome work

. get outta meh mind. Kidding. But its awesome \m/. keep up the awesome work
6/21/2004 c1
81daphnegray78
Wow. Great use of imagery...very vivid and powerful. I love the last line. It just wraps up the poem wonderfully and gives it this edge. Awesome, awesome work.

Wow. Great use of imagery...very vivid and powerful. I love the last line. It just wraps up the poem wonderfully and gives it this edge. Awesome, awesome work.
6/21/2004 c1 simpleplan13
WOw.. I liek the repition and I LOVE that last line.. great job
WOw.. I liek the repition and I LOVE that last line.. great job
6/20/2004 c1 Brandy Bear
this is really good it is diffrent from what you normally write but it is very good
Brandybear
this is really good it is diffrent from what you normally write but it is very good
Brandybear