for I Thought I Knew You7/9/2004 c1 Greenleaf Kenobi
This is strange, but good and interesting. It holds a lot of potential, but I would advise reading it over for spelling and grammar errors. Other than that it is pretty good, but confusing in parts. Oh well, I am waiting for new chapters!
This is strange, but good and interesting. It holds a lot of potential, but I would advise reading it over for spelling and grammar errors. Other than that it is pretty good, but confusing in parts. Oh well, I am waiting for new chapters!
7/8/2004 c1 
19Brkndoll
i agree, it does kinda jump into everything really soon, but what i see when i read it is a great story. it has mystery and depth, and wonder. it keeps the reader interested, keep going, id live to see more
19Brkndolli agree, it does kinda jump into everything really soon, but what i see when i read it is a great story. it has mystery and depth, and wonder. it keeps the reader interested, keep going, id live to see more
6/22/2004 c1 11LifeMystery
Very good so far..It kinda jumps into action very fast, which I don't mind, I just think you need to slow down a bit more..maybe a little background. Otherwise it's great, update soon
11LifeMysteryVery good so far..It kinda jumps into action very fast, which I don't mind, I just think you need to slow down a bit more..maybe a little background. Otherwise it's great, update soon