for What more do you want?3/3/2006 c1 Benjamin - To Be Deleted
"i want you to whisper the lies / ... / muffle the unborn cries" Gorgeous. Please, keep writing. I love everything you've written thus far, though don't have the time to always reveiw it. I will do my best to though.
"i want you to whisper the lies / ... / muffle the unborn cries" Gorgeous. Please, keep writing. I love everything you've written thus far, though don't have the time to always reveiw it. I will do my best to though.
6/21/2004 c1 
14arbysauce93
You have such beautiful word choice. This is just a beautiful poem. I love the line,
"Breathe the last words of a murder,"
YOu write such powerful statements so beautifully. Keep up the good work!
14arbysauce93You have such beautiful word choice. This is just a beautiful poem. I love the line,
"Breathe the last words of a murder,"
YOu write such powerful statements so beautifully. Keep up the good work!
6/21/2004 c1 38Always Writing
Wow, this is so beautiful. It's so inspiring. I really love it. Your descriptions are so intense, and your words are so...meaningful. You've really done a great job.
Keep writing,
Carrie
38Always WritingWow, this is so beautiful. It's so inspiring. I really love it. Your descriptions are so intense, and your words are so...meaningful. You've really done a great job.
Keep writing,
Carrie