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10/20/2005 c1 21CaramelCream
Your suicide poems are awesome. I'm not even sure what to say anymore. They're great and deep and very well written. Good work. Keep it up.
6/30/2004 c1 612simpleplan13
wow... very poweful... extremely awesome ending.. I like the alternating italics
6/30/2004 c1 Black Wolf of Death
Oh my gawd. I don't know how to put it. It was sad but a very good poem. I have no idea why this kinda stuff attracts me. Oh well.
6/27/2004 c1 418Amethyst Horizon
AMAZING! YOU ROCK! this poem is so incredible! keep up the awesome work!
6/23/2004 c1 24mAxTeR
it so damn beautiful.. keep on writing.. r/r mine too..
6/21/2004 c1 29Shades of Ink
Beautiful... I could alomst feel the desperation... and even relief when she let go. That sounds morbid, I know, but in a way it was release.
Er... not that I'm in any way supporting suicide... merely artistically impartial.
Wonderful, though it would have been ten times better as free-verse.
Happy Tuesday! (well, almost tuesday)
6/21/2004 c1 93Nienyalie
Beautiful, this is absolutely brilliant.

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