for Hold10/20/2005 c1 
21CaramelCream
Your suicide poems are awesome. I'm not even sure what to say anymore. They're great and deep and very well written. Good work. Keep it up.
21CaramelCreamYour suicide poems are awesome. I'm not even sure what to say anymore. They're great and deep and very well written. Good work. Keep it up.
6/30/2004 c1 612simpleplan13
wow... very poweful... extremely awesome ending.. I like the alternating italics
612simpleplan13wow... very poweful... extremely awesome ending.. I like the alternating italics
6/30/2004 c1 Black Wolf of Death
Oh my gawd. I don't know how to put it. It was sad but a very good poem. I have no idea why this kinda stuff attracts me. Oh well.
Oh my gawd. I don't know how to put it. It was sad but a very good poem. I have no idea why this kinda stuff attracts me. Oh well.
6/27/2004 c1 418Amethyst Horizon
AMAZING! YOU ROCK! this poem is so incredible! keep up the awesome work!
418Amethyst HorizonAMAZING! YOU ROCK! this poem is so incredible! keep up the awesome work!
6/21/2004 c1 29Shades of Ink
Beautiful... I could alomst feel the desperation... and even relief when she let go. That sounds morbid, I know, but in a way it was release.
Er... not that I'm in any way supporting suicide... merely artistically impartial.
Wonderful, though it would have been ten times better as free-verse.
Happy Tuesday! (well, almost tuesday)
29Shades of InkBeautiful... I could alomst feel the desperation... and even relief when she let go. That sounds morbid, I know, but in a way it was release.
Er... not that I'm in any way supporting suicide... merely artistically impartial.
Wonderful, though it would have been ten times better as free-verse.
Happy Tuesday! (well, almost tuesday)