for Gasping6/22/2004 c1 
13Grace Hsia
Quite an interesting idea on what sleep is. I guess you really don't like the color white...lol! Anyhows, yes, it is quite visual and it is also quite descriptive. (Why am I saying quite so much?) Ah well. Anyhows, is this going to be a one-shot or a story?
*Orient Fox*
13Grace HsiaQuite an interesting idea on what sleep is. I guess you really don't like the color white...lol! Anyhows, yes, it is quite visual and it is also quite descriptive. (Why am I saying quite so much?) Ah well. Anyhows, is this going to be a one-shot or a story?
*Orient Fox*
6/21/2004 c1 3Cry Tears of Darkness
its very good. i just have one and one only complaint: format! i dunno why its like that but there should be more lines? ok did that make sense? meh, ignore me and know that this was great!
3Cry Tears of Darknessits very good. i just have one and one only complaint: format! i dunno why its like that but there should be more lines? ok did that make sense? meh, ignore me and know that this was great!