9/28/2005 c1 3Pont
Wow... this one is very good. I hope that's not from personal experience!

Wonderfully done. Common subject matter, but you did it in a way that isn't cliche. Great job, mellonamin.

~ponteh

7/17/2004 c1 40singingspeechless
i like the structure of the poem, although it's really sad that this had to happen to you. i've been in a very similar situation many times and (i don't know if this sounds corny to you or not but...) I find the best solution is to pray. seriously... it works..God is awesome and he always provides. good job.

6/23/2004 c1 26xXHaYzElXx
Hm...reminds me of a poem that I've got up here...anyways, i liked it. Good job!
~*Hayzel

6/22/2004 c1 81nesy
As you have said just now, I know that feeling so well. And I think I'm going to pretend for all my life. Good job, you can feel loneliness through all your poem.