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7/21/2006 c1 awais
really smooth baby! :D
10/16/2004 c1 3DHABUZ
hohoho! shezo
ok fine i admitt its not a romantic poem! but its one of the best poems i have read on the site nice work dudette!
9/3/2004 c1 10youdon'tknowme91
i thought it was REALLY
beatiful :) ..hey, random question: can i know where you live? As in what country, i mean =P (if you'll ever get back to me, that is =p) ..was this poem between you and Him? (I'm Muslim too, but I'm saying Him as in God as in Allah but i guess it goes in general on other religion's gods too) Because that was how it felt to me.. and yup, i feel connected with your poem again, funnily =P Oh, and another thing; you read stuffs on Rumi too? I love his works! :P :D okay,i'm off ;) -nahjan
8/21/2004 c1 270queenvixta
Great poem not much more I can say than that cos it was simply beautiful!
7/30/2004 c1 42flowers in May
wow, I realy like this, keep it up :)
7/21/2004 c1 4The Jade Prince
Truly beautiful; either you've read a lot of books or you know true love. Brava.
-The Jade Prince
7/17/2004 c1 catseyeview
very beautiful with wonderful imagery.
7/16/2004 c1 5Punkerella
Wow.That is beautiful =)
Thankyou for the kind words.
7/15/2004 c1 21Diva Chiba
holy... very very well written! your use of metaphors is superb. well done!
~Diva Chiba
7/14/2004 c1 anon123
I've already reviewed this, but I just felt like re-reviewing ;)
There are a couple of lines that I really, really like...and those are:
"My beloved is every question I ask,
Every breath I breathe,
Every step I take,
Every sight I see!"
AND
"I awoke, drunk with intoxication and bliss.
I must have dreamt of you."
So...GREAT POEM, even if something so romantiky was not what i really expected from you :)
love,
Me!
7/7/2004 c1 32Birdaloo
nicley done! thanks for the reviews! this poem has really beautiful imagery! great job! keep up the spectacular work!
~Birdy
7/6/2004 c1 24LovesTeardrop
Aww that was very. Very nicely written with a good rhythm behind it. Wel done.
Thank you for reviewing my poem also.
LovesTeardrop
7/6/2004 c1 kamikaze899
wow cool! i'm not that into romance poems, but i really liked this! nice imagery, good job.. ^_^
btw, thnx for the review.. ^^
7/5/2004 c1 Imaan-Z-gr8
hey shitty... u must be really desperate to mail me like that but anyhoo... nice work moti... bohat interesting kaam you kia hai... did that sound right? its a lovey dovey fluffy mushy poem but i dont hate it! good work... c ya kiddo... au revoir!
cheers mate!
7/5/2004 c1 98hurtmushroom
Thanks for the review! ;)
This is a great poem, liked it very much!
Keep it up,
cio, hoellenwauwau
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