for Intoxication7/5/2004 c1 
14Dirty Wallpaper
very nice work. it seemed like a very rich poem, especially with the mention of nectar. very romantic.
"i must have dreamt of you..." beautiful.
kudos!
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P:S - thanks muchly for the review :)
14Dirty Wallpapervery nice work. it seemed like a very rich poem, especially with the mention of nectar. very romantic.
"i must have dreamt of you..." beautiful.
kudos!
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P:S - thanks muchly for the review :)
7/3/2004 c1 37happy-go-lucky
*reads profile* HEY ..i'm paki too! lol..very good poem...It reminds me of the song "toxic" By Britney Spears...you know that song.
Thanx for reviewing my poem..
^_^ Happy-Go-Lucky
37happy-go-lucky*reads profile* HEY ..i'm paki too! lol..very good poem...It reminds me of the song "toxic" By Britney Spears...you know that song.
Thanx for reviewing my poem..
^_^ Happy-Go-Lucky
7/3/2004 c1 RisingBeauty
I like the simple form you used in this, it was short and sweet. I loved all the metaphors you used for love. Especially "My rose-gardens will become verdant forests of bloom" because it was so unexpected, and it gave me such a beautiful mental image. I also liked the line "honeyed words ring through my ears," the description was great. Also, I liked the title of the poem, because love can seem intoxicating. Nice write.
I like the simple form you used in this, it was short and sweet. I loved all the metaphors you used for love. Especially "My rose-gardens will become verdant forests of bloom" because it was so unexpected, and it gave me such a beautiful mental image. I also liked the line "honeyed words ring through my ears," the description was great. Also, I liked the title of the poem, because love can seem intoxicating. Nice write.
7/3/2004 c1 melanieC
wow! talk about going into depth! excellent work!
wow! talk about going into depth! excellent work!
7/1/2004 c1 43Carter Tachikawa
Beautiful, just beautiful. Truly one of the best poems I have read in a while. That is a good kind of intoxication. You've described it well. Keep up the good work.
~CT
43Carter TachikawaBeautiful, just beautiful. Truly one of the best poems I have read in a while. That is a good kind of intoxication. You've described it well. Keep up the good work.
~CT
6/29/2004 c1 48Sun Chime
Wow! This is one of the nicest Love poems I've read, ever! Awesome work! Write some more. And thanks for the review.
48Sun ChimeWow! This is one of the nicest Love poems I've read, ever! Awesome work! Write some more. And thanks for the review.
6/22/2004 c1 3Sillygoose49
I love this poem. It is very well written and expressed. Can't wait to see more of your work.
Sillygoose
P.S.: check out some of my work, please!
3Sillygoose49I love this poem. It is very well written and expressed. Can't wait to see more of your work.
Sillygoose
P.S.: check out some of my work, please!
6/22/2004 c1 30Stringergirl
i KNEW u cud write great poetry after reading ur fic...well, this is blank verse..but its REALLY cool.keep it up! :D
oh, btw, chappie 3 of sivelra is up..ant interest?
Aamna
30Stringergirli KNEW u cud write great poetry after reading ur fic...well, this is blank verse..but its REALLY cool.keep it up! :D
oh, btw, chappie 3 of sivelra is up..ant interest?
Aamna
6/22/2004 c1 itz da MARAINA
NOT WHAT I XPECTED!
no, it's really good, actually, and i love the last two lines...i mean, i didn't expect a mushy, gushy, romantiky poem 4m u...but it was great anywayz...all gushy mushy!
NOT WHAT I XPECTED!
no, it's really good, actually, and i love the last two lines...i mean, i didn't expect a mushy, gushy, romantiky poem 4m u...but it was great anywayz...all gushy mushy!