for Falling in hatred8/21/2004 c1 nick-wordsmith
Good. You told a sad story and although perhaps this wasn't the best form to do it in, it seems to work ok. Keep writing!
Stones decay, words last
Nick
Good. You told a sad story and although perhaps this wasn't the best form to do it in, it seems to work ok. Keep writing!
Stones decay, words last
Nick
7/27/2004 c1 
126Silvarius
WOW! So much emotion conveyed into so short a poem. Very nice. I'm going to add this to my favorites.
126SilvariusWOW! So much emotion conveyed into so short a poem. Very nice. I'm going to add this to my favorites.
7/5/2004 c1 flame
*tear* um.. (kaze u know y i hope) no joke peeps who read this
*tear* um.. (kaze u know y i hope) no joke peeps who read this
7/2/2004 c1 136Anat Qetesh
I love the rhthm and movement. I like the imagery though it seems strained at some parts. But I think its great!
thanks for the reviews..helped alot!
Fallen V
136Anat QeteshI love the rhthm and movement. I like the imagery though it seems strained at some parts. But I think its great!
thanks for the reviews..helped alot!
Fallen V
7/1/2004 c1 SanitysOverrated87
Wow...that is really good. I love it, it really tells how it is not one person doing these things and it is helped by others. i really love it.
BTW, InuYasha is beast. E-mail me we can chat the Inu chat ;)
Wow...that is really good. I love it, it really tells how it is not one person doing these things and it is helped by others. i really love it.
BTW, InuYasha is beast. E-mail me we can chat the Inu chat ;)
6/22/2004 c1 Amaki-chii
ooh.. Very nice flow. Extreamly truthfull too! Good beat, flow, and rhythem sound for a good poet! A.C
ooh.. Very nice flow. Extreamly truthfull too! Good beat, flow, and rhythem sound for a good poet! A.C
6/22/2004 c1 110KonekOniko
Wow...beautifully written poem. The flow goes well and it's a very truthful poem. I haven't seen another poem like it, it's great. ~Sumi-chan
110KonekOnikoWow...beautifully written poem. The flow goes well and it's a very truthful poem. I haven't seen another poem like it, it's great. ~Sumi-chan