for Seekers8/12/2004 c1 
12Mirrorwind
I like this poem a lot, especially about life being a lottery and holding the ticket. For me, that was the hook, the line from the poem that gets stuck in your head. Very nice job. I like the focused emotion in your poems.
12MirrorwindI like this poem a lot, especially about life being a lottery and holding the ticket. For me, that was the hook, the line from the poem that gets stuck in your head. Very nice job. I like the focused emotion in your poems.