for Not for Me8/19/2015 c30 OscarJLaw
lord I cried so much over Andrew's is so fked up
and also I hope Dave and Lexia end up together
he clearly loves her a lot
lord I cried so much over Andrew's is so fked up
and also I hope Dave and Lexia end up together
he clearly loves her a lot
8/18/2015 c30 
2mandy96
Whaaat noooooooo! The ending was so abrupt! So sad that Andrew died ): but I did like the development of Lexia's character throughout the story and also the fact that Lexia didn't suddenly fall in love with Dave and stayed true to herself, even if he liked her. Great story!
Amanda
2mandy96Whaaat noooooooo! The ending was so abrupt! So sad that Andrew died ): but I did like the development of Lexia's character throughout the story and also the fact that Lexia didn't suddenly fall in love with Dave and stayed true to herself, even if he liked her. Great story!
Amanda
8/12/2015 c30 CranesFlyHighOvertheSky
Wow. I actually logged in to review this story (that's saying a lot, considering I'm quite a lazy person when it comes to reviewing other people's work). First off, thanks for writing this (it must have been a lot of work, so kudos to you for that). Usually I don't read works that are this long (mainly because I'm always preoccupied with other activities and rarely have any free time), but this story actually managed to hold my attention to the very end (a.k.a. it was very captivating). Yes, the plot was a little cliche at times, but at the same time, it was not the typical, hackneyed the-main-girl-gets-the-guy-in-less-than-two-chapters kind of story, one of the factors that motivated me to finish your story (I mean, you killed Andrew, and Lexia sort of abandoned Dave, who had to cope with his feelings...alone). Sure, there were trivial grammatical errors in the first few chapters, but your diction and sentence structures actually improved as the story progressed. I hope you continue to pursue writing because you clearly have the talent to do so. Anyway, I'm done rambling. Great job with this story and thanks for sharing it with everyone.
Wow. I actually logged in to review this story (that's saying a lot, considering I'm quite a lazy person when it comes to reviewing other people's work). First off, thanks for writing this (it must have been a lot of work, so kudos to you for that). Usually I don't read works that are this long (mainly because I'm always preoccupied with other activities and rarely have any free time), but this story actually managed to hold my attention to the very end (a.k.a. it was very captivating). Yes, the plot was a little cliche at times, but at the same time, it was not the typical, hackneyed the-main-girl-gets-the-guy-in-less-than-two-chapters kind of story, one of the factors that motivated me to finish your story (I mean, you killed Andrew, and Lexia sort of abandoned Dave, who had to cope with his feelings...alone). Sure, there were trivial grammatical errors in the first few chapters, but your diction and sentence structures actually improved as the story progressed. I hope you continue to pursue writing because you clearly have the talent to do so. Anyway, I'm done rambling. Great job with this story and thanks for sharing it with everyone.
5/19/2015 c30 Guest
I'm speechless...all i can to say is that this story is refreshing, surprising, peaceful and incredible..anymore will be insulting because this one speaks for itself..i'm super duper glad that i came across and read it...thank you author
I'm speechless...all i can to say is that this story is refreshing, surprising, peaceful and incredible..anymore will be insulting because this one speaks for itself..i'm super duper glad that i came across and read it...thank you author
4/30/2015 c30 Guest
what?! after all those emotions and heated moments they dont even end up together? why!?
what?! after all those emotions and heated moments they dont even end up together? why!?
4/25/2015 c4 Lazerkat
I am a dork. By your standards, I AM A DORK.
This is really great, by the way, keep writing!
I am a dork. By your standards, I AM A DORK.
This is really great, by the way, keep writing!
4/8/2015 c30 Moi
:O Whaaaaaaaat?! Ok firstly thanks so much for keeping this story here, because so many popular authors took down their stories that yours is one of the only finished stories with over 1000 reviews that hasn't been removed from FP. It's been an incredible read, with great, relatable, imperfect characters who lots of readers can empathise with. So yeah, you deserve all the reviews you got, and your work is awesome! But the ending just left me... Speechless? Flabbergasted? Upset? I don't know. It is very unexpected, and I know you said it at the beginning, but I still thought there was going to be a happy ending. The kind where they get together. But hey, I guess closure is better than nothing :) Plus, it's hour story and you choose how it ends xD I like the unpredictability of the ending though. And I'm gonna pretend in my head that Dave and Lexi get together - or at least see each other again, like Dave said. They make a great couple! Anyway, I could probably rant on about how awesome your characters are, Andrew, Kane and her hilarity etc but you're probably not even going to see this since you wrote this aaaages ago! So that's it really :D But on the off-chance that you are reading this, I just wanna tell you that you are an amazing person for giving us this incredible read, and I wish you good luck with whatever you're doing right now .
Moi
:O Whaaaaaaaat?! Ok firstly thanks so much for keeping this story here, because so many popular authors took down their stories that yours is one of the only finished stories with over 1000 reviews that hasn't been removed from FP. It's been an incredible read, with great, relatable, imperfect characters who lots of readers can empathise with. So yeah, you deserve all the reviews you got, and your work is awesome! But the ending just left me... Speechless? Flabbergasted? Upset? I don't know. It is very unexpected, and I know you said it at the beginning, but I still thought there was going to be a happy ending. The kind where they get together. But hey, I guess closure is better than nothing :) Plus, it's hour story and you choose how it ends xD I like the unpredictability of the ending though. And I'm gonna pretend in my head that Dave and Lexi get together - or at least see each other again, like Dave said. They make a great couple! Anyway, I could probably rant on about how awesome your characters are, Andrew, Kane and her hilarity etc but you're probably not even going to see this since you wrote this aaaages ago! So that's it really :D But on the off-chance that you are reading this, I just wanna tell you that you are an amazing person for giving us this incredible read, and I wish you good luck with whatever you're doing right now .
Moi
4/6/2015 c30 LizBiz2029
NOOOOOOOOOOOO! You CANNOT end here! No! You cannot end like this, with the most horrible ending in the world! Dave and Lexia were meant to be together! This is not fair! I'm crying right now. CRYING. Where is there happy ending?! Why did Andrew have to die?! Why didn't you make them at least exchange emails or SOMETHING. PLEASE. I CAN'T GO ON WITH AN ENDING LIKE THIS. You need to write a different one! Seriously. You don't say ANYTHING about what happens to Kane, or Christine, or Mark. You don't say what happens to Lexia's family! You don't say what freaking schools Lexia and Dave go to now! KEEP WRITING. MAKE A SEQUEL. Goshdang it, why must you torture me like this?! I know its been 8 years, but you have to rewrite this story or at least make a sequel! That was a terrible ending! Andrew dying was so abrupt! ARGHHHH!
Okay, sorry about my rant. I'm sorry if it made you feel bad or anything. But I just wanted to say that this was an amazing story and that I probably will be depressed if you don't continue their story. Thank you, at least, for having Dave wish that he'll see Lexia again. And, of course, since his first wish came true and their are no such things as coincidences (I believe everything happens for a reason) they will probably end up with each other in the end. It's just that there are so many heartbreaks and so many cracked loves that I feel like I can't deal with this one. I've just grown so attached to the idea that Dave and Lexia belong together... Anyway, I still want to say that this was an amazing story and I will always be waiting for a sequel. You have amazing ideas, and your writing style is pretty cool (I love writing, so... :D)
I really hope you read this review. XD Peace!
NOOOOOOOOOOOO! You CANNOT end here! No! You cannot end like this, with the most horrible ending in the world! Dave and Lexia were meant to be together! This is not fair! I'm crying right now. CRYING. Where is there happy ending?! Why did Andrew have to die?! Why didn't you make them at least exchange emails or SOMETHING. PLEASE. I CAN'T GO ON WITH AN ENDING LIKE THIS. You need to write a different one! Seriously. You don't say ANYTHING about what happens to Kane, or Christine, or Mark. You don't say what happens to Lexia's family! You don't say what freaking schools Lexia and Dave go to now! KEEP WRITING. MAKE A SEQUEL. Goshdang it, why must you torture me like this?! I know its been 8 years, but you have to rewrite this story or at least make a sequel! That was a terrible ending! Andrew dying was so abrupt! ARGHHHH!
Okay, sorry about my rant. I'm sorry if it made you feel bad or anything. But I just wanted to say that this was an amazing story and that I probably will be depressed if you don't continue their story. Thank you, at least, for having Dave wish that he'll see Lexia again. And, of course, since his first wish came true and their are no such things as coincidences (I believe everything happens for a reason) they will probably end up with each other in the end. It's just that there are so many heartbreaks and so many cracked loves that I feel like I can't deal with this one. I've just grown so attached to the idea that Dave and Lexia belong together... Anyway, I still want to say that this was an amazing story and I will always be waiting for a sequel. You have amazing ideas, and your writing style is pretty cool (I love writing, so... :D)
I really hope you read this review. XD Peace!
12/25/2014 c30 Guest
Hi I've never written a review for a story and I know this story was published a couple of years ago but I just wanted to say WOW. In the beginning I would have never guessed that this story would have such an impact on me. It taught me lessons about family, relationships and that I should value the bond that I have with my close friends. So this story was amazing in my opninion... but you lied... and you hurt me. I know that's a weird thing to say but you wrote that nobody would die. So I stayed optimistic... until the end.. maybe it was all a nightmare. But now that I have finished the story I can tell you that you are truly an amazing writer and I know that it had to happen but it still hurts... there aren't many stories that can make me cry... but maybe it's because I can relate to the bond that Andrew and Lexia share that it hurt so much. Just wanted to say thank you for writing this story... but please remove that post that says nobody will die... it gives people false hope. Truly an amazing story
Hi I've never written a review for a story and I know this story was published a couple of years ago but I just wanted to say WOW. In the beginning I would have never guessed that this story would have such an impact on me. It taught me lessons about family, relationships and that I should value the bond that I have with my close friends. So this story was amazing in my opninion... but you lied... and you hurt me. I know that's a weird thing to say but you wrote that nobody would die. So I stayed optimistic... until the end.. maybe it was all a nightmare. But now that I have finished the story I can tell you that you are truly an amazing writer and I know that it had to happen but it still hurts... there aren't many stories that can make me cry... but maybe it's because I can relate to the bond that Andrew and Lexia share that it hurt so much. Just wanted to say thank you for writing this story... but please remove that post that says nobody will die... it gives people false hope. Truly an amazing story
12/25/2014 c30 RosaSilvermist
Oh my God. This story is just...wow! I don't even know how to describe it...it's great! I kinda wished there was more of Cason though. Great story!
Oh my God. This story is just...wow! I don't even know how to describe it...it's great! I kinda wished there was more of Cason though. Great story!
11/27/2014 c30 HappyButDissapoi
First of all, love the story. Congrats on a completely original ending. However, just saying, you lied... in chapter 14, titled chapter 13, you say: "2. Does this story have sad ending? Um…it depends on how you interpret a "sad" ending. No one's going to die."
Clearly, that's not true. Granted, I love the story, but this made me immensely sad.
First of all, love the story. Congrats on a completely original ending. However, just saying, you lied... in chapter 14, titled chapter 13, you say: "2. Does this story have sad ending? Um…it depends on how you interpret a "sad" ending. No one's going to die."
Clearly, that's not true. Granted, I love the story, but this made me immensely sad.