for The Enigma of Destiny12/25/2004 c1 
22whacked
ahh...you prolly don't remember me...and just wana to ask...what happened? why did u stop writing? just when we were about to find out how chase is! ack...how could you leave us like that on a...sort of..cliffhanger! heh..hope everything's ok with ya and the life is treating ya well...hope to see an update soon!
22whackedahh...you prolly don't remember me...and just wana to ask...what happened? why did u stop writing? just when we were about to find out how chase is! ack...how could you leave us like that on a...sort of..cliffhanger! heh..hope everything's ok with ya and the life is treating ya well...hope to see an update soon!
10/10/2004 c1 me
if youre continuing this story can you leave a note in your profile, or post an a/n so we all know. because i'm always checking back only to find nothing, I hope you do continue, but I'd just like to know, so please post something telling us, thanks ;-)
if youre continuing this story can you leave a note in your profile, or post an a/n so we all know. because i'm always checking back only to find nothing, I hope you do continue, but I'd just like to know, so please post something telling us, thanks ;-)
9/12/2004 c6 Butterfli-kiss
I love your stories so much! You have such talent. Your story is so interesting. It seems weird to think that she finally found Chase. I wonder if he'll remember her? Hopefully he'll let her publish the book. Will they ever fall in love with each other? I can't wait to read the next chapter!
I love your stories so much! You have such talent. Your story is so interesting. It seems weird to think that she finally found Chase. I wonder if he'll remember her? Hopefully he'll let her publish the book. Will they ever fall in love with each other? I can't wait to read the next chapter!
9/6/2004 c6 Kate
Hello there... this is VintageWhiteGloves, previously FrayedGalliano... anyway just thought I'd drop a review and yell at you. Uh-huh... now I'm not quite sure if there's something wrong i.e. you're dead, seriously injured, or incapacitated in some way. In which case disregard any further rantings, and have a wonderful day. Now, if none of the above apply to you the UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE NOW! Ah, yes... updating It's this lovely thing where you write the next chapter, then post it so we can all admire your genius and leave you wonderful reviews. Mm hmm, now, we're all ready to leave pre-mentioned reviews... only we can't 'cause you haven't update in forever! Ah, I'm going into withdrawl here... /need/ dear Raine, and Chase... and Philip (dear child's been neglected). Well, I suppose I have yelled at you enough, and I am assuming you have a computer problem or something 'cause you haven't reviewed my stories for quite a while either... but if that's not the case PLEASE update(see I did ask nicely). Ah yes, well I really do like this story, and I hope you'll continue, I even had to sign out of my fp name to review, 'cause apparently you're not allowed to review more than one chapter... hmm. Oh, yes, I'm going now :0)
Kisses*Kate*
Hello there... this is VintageWhiteGloves, previously FrayedGalliano... anyway just thought I'd drop a review and yell at you. Uh-huh... now I'm not quite sure if there's something wrong i.e. you're dead, seriously injured, or incapacitated in some way. In which case disregard any further rantings, and have a wonderful day. Now, if none of the above apply to you the UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE NOW! Ah, yes... updating It's this lovely thing where you write the next chapter, then post it so we can all admire your genius and leave you wonderful reviews. Mm hmm, now, we're all ready to leave pre-mentioned reviews... only we can't 'cause you haven't update in forever! Ah, I'm going into withdrawl here... /need/ dear Raine, and Chase... and Philip (dear child's been neglected). Well, I suppose I have yelled at you enough, and I am assuming you have a computer problem or something 'cause you haven't reviewed my stories for quite a while either... but if that's not the case PLEASE update(see I did ask nicely). Ah yes, well I really do like this story, and I hope you'll continue, I even had to sign out of my fp name to review, 'cause apparently you're not allowed to review more than one chapter... hmm. Oh, yes, I'm going now :0)
Kisses*Kate*
7/19/2004 c6 Unaff3ct3d
GREAT!I loved it!I wanted to cry it was really really emotional.I felt like I was Raine and you did a great job to help me to do so!Keep up the great work...
Kristi
GREAT!I loved it!I wanted to cry it was really really emotional.I felt like I was Raine and you did a great job to help me to do so!Keep up the great work...
Kristi
7/10/2004 c6 Elze
Ah...i see know.
ignore my senselessly oblivious question...
Ah...i see know.
ignore my senselessly oblivious question...
7/10/2004 c3 Elze
i might sound stupid in asking but...is raine going to die soon?
i mean, is there suppose to be a hint from "the last line in this chap?(aka..she has one to two months to think about it...)or is it the fact that shes going to write a book or something? i am confused *Sheepish*
BTW i really like the story so far. your tone is so different and amazingly structured...you have much potential...
i might sound stupid in asking but...is raine going to die soon?
i mean, is there suppose to be a hint from "the last line in this chap?(aka..she has one to two months to think about it...)or is it the fact that shes going to write a book or something? i am confused *Sheepish*
BTW i really like the story so far. your tone is so different and amazingly structured...you have much potential...
7/9/2004 c6 4anatidaephobiac
Yes! Your story is very pretty!
And you're doing such a great job with the past/present thing... I tried that once... Let's just say NOBODY has ever seen that story, nor will anyone ever see it. It's like... the worst thing possible :0 hehe. but that was a few years ago... i really sucked back then. anyway... it was extremely confusing. so i have to give you props, because you're doing great with it.
update soon!
4anatidaephobiacYes! Your story is very pretty!
And you're doing such a great job with the past/present thing... I tried that once... Let's just say NOBODY has ever seen that story, nor will anyone ever see it. It's like... the worst thing possible :0 hehe. but that was a few years ago... i really sucked back then. anyway... it was extremely confusing. so i have to give you props, because you're doing great with it.
update soon!
7/8/2004 c6 vintagewhitegloves
Yay! UPDATE, who ho! Ah, i'll hold off my dogs, just cause i'm being a lazy ass, and have yet to start my next chappie. Well, i'd write a longer review (really, i would) but i'm feeling extremely sick...(word of the wise, NEVER enter an eating contest of any kind, with a group of football players.)... anyways, *insert me gushing about absolutely wonderful this is* yes, well then. UPDATE SOON!
Yay! UPDATE, who ho! Ah, i'll hold off my dogs, just cause i'm being a lazy ass, and have yet to start my next chappie. Well, i'd write a longer review (really, i would) but i'm feeling extremely sick...(word of the wise, NEVER enter an eating contest of any kind, with a group of football players.)... anyways, *insert me gushing about absolutely wonderful this is* yes, well then. UPDATE SOON!
7/8/2004 c6 a reader
I really enjoy the story thus far, i hope you up date soon, cause I cant wait for you next chapter, is it going to have her meeting chase? or are we going to hear more about the past?
I really enjoy the story thus far, i hope you up date soon, cause I cant wait for you next chapter, is it going to have her meeting chase? or are we going to hear more about the past?
7/8/2004 c5 a reader
i liked this chapter:)
i liked this chapter:)
7/8/2004 c4 a reader
this is a good reveiw, i just cant think of anything constive to say only i really really like this story:)
this is a good reveiw, i just cant think of anything constive to say only i really really like this story:)
7/8/2004 c3 a reader
this is a really well writen story (you dont see abunence of them on this site but, most make up for it in imagnation)
and really like the story line how it keeps you guessing till the end :)
this is a really well writen story (you dont see abunence of them on this site but, most make up for it in imagnation)
and really like the story line how it keeps you guessing till the end :)