7/8/2004 c1 a reader
when i first started this story i didnt think it would be good and it seem like it wouldnt have a happy ending. but io like the staory so far :)

7/8/2004 c6 22whacked
oh yay! she found him! now she just has to go see him...wonder what that's gonna turn out to be like..not much of chase in this chapter...but there was phillip! yay...love phillip he's so adorably innocent! anyway, really got to know raine more in this chapter, you really managed to convey her feelings amazingly well and thats often very hard for most authors to do! heh..update soon..i wanna know what happens next!

7/7/2004 c6 Rinfirithiel
oh my gosh this story is AWESOME! I'm hooked! I can't wait until you update! ^_^
~Rinfirithiel

7/4/2004 c5 22whacked
good stuff! ah...amazing writing i really like it...raine's quite different from the usual i-am-alone characters she not like like i-am-alone-but-don't-want-to-be more like i-am-alone-and-happy...ok...like that made anysense..sorry..just babbling...anyways i want to know more this story's so mysterious..hehe i have no clue what's going to happen..so...update soon please!

7/2/2004 c5 1Stevshals
This is really good! I can't wait for you to update again!

7/2/2004 c5 10Tiaret
Wow. Wow. That's great!
I really like your story. Things seem to be progressing quite nicely.
But there are some things that kind of confuse me: why do Chase and Steve speak so eloquently when they're just football players? Why don't their friends notice how different they are? Why is Jessica so stupid? How did Raine's mother get to be the way she is?
Aside from that, I can't wait to read more. UPDATE!1

7/1/2004 c5 4anatidaephobiac
Great chapter...
I love the present/past time thing. If I tried to do that throughout my story like you've been doing, I think I'd just end up confusing everyone to the point of where they started flaming me. It wouldn't be a pretty story.
But you have a very pretty story. I like your pretty story very much.
Okay... I'm being stupid now so I'll shut up.
Update soon!