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12/4/2004 c1 21Sublime Rhapsody
Very wonderfully written and great imagery for your auidence. Great work!
7/3/2004 c1 26Endless Nightmares
Hello Morbid- This piece I like. Very good writing. And I might add that this was a little disturbing. The only thing you could to do is expand your paragraphs more. I could see you writing very well if you did. Read The Awakening, its in the horror section.
6/23/2004 c1 HappyBunny1
What a great, great story. It's far-fetched, but that's what fantasy is supposed to be, right? I love how it was written. I also liked how you used the whole "happy, happy, oh so happy prance through the fields of dandelions and sunflowers" phrase throughout the story. It gets the point across. I also felt a great deal of sympathy for Adam. Anywho, wonderful story. Loved it.

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