for Avatre Otherkin8/24/2005 c1 
20DaughterofDarkness13
i can't wait till you get more of this story written. it's really good so far and i'd like to know where the 3 of them plan to go. please, write more soon!
20DaughterofDarkness13i can't wait till you get more of this story written. it's really good so far and i'd like to know where the 3 of them plan to go. please, write more soon!
5/4/2005 c4 writergirlstevie
Good story, I've been reading DarknessofDaughter13's story it's pretty good so far! So is yours! Please update soon!
~Stevie~
Good story, I've been reading DarknessofDaughter13's story it's pretty good so far! So is yours! Please update soon!
~Stevie~
10/21/2004 c1 16Pico the Great
Good. GOod fun to read, and I'm enjoying it so far. Fear not, I shall continue reading.
-PTG
16Pico the GreatGood. GOod fun to read, and I'm enjoying it so far. Fear not, I shall continue reading.
-PTG
8/9/2004 c3 20DaughterofDarkness13
keep writing! i've enjoyed it so far, i'd love to see how you finish this.
20DaughterofDarkness13keep writing! i've enjoyed it so far, i'd love to see how you finish this.
7/6/2004 c3 Meltedscissors
a hoy hoy...good story line. It has epic written all over it. i wouldve developed the beginning some more, but i dont know your particular style of writing, being this is all i have read. this is going to get a lot better as it moves along.
a hoy hoy...good story line. It has epic written all over it. i wouldve developed the beginning some more, but i dont know your particular style of writing, being this is all i have read. this is going to get a lot better as it moves along.
6/24/2004 c3 174marshbar960
so far so good...i can't wait to see what happens when they finally reach Southville. thanks for sharing and please continue writing!
174marshbar960so far so good...i can't wait to see what happens when they finally reach Southville. thanks for sharing and please continue writing!
6/23/2004 c2 marshbar960
hm... very descriptive and sophisticated! thanks for sharing and keep writing!
hm... very descriptive and sophisticated! thanks for sharing and keep writing!
6/23/2004 c1 marshbar960
hm...some parts seem a bit twisted and confusing at first but i guess i have to read it again! thanks for sharing and keep writing!
hm...some parts seem a bit twisted and confusing at first but i guess i have to read it again! thanks for sharing and keep writing!