for Love Hurts10/17/2009 c6 
3Uchiha Chi
It's so GOOD! Oh my gosh! The chapters were a little short, but it was still fabulous. I love Peter in all of his cuteness and cuddlyness. Joel is amazing, and he's so melancholic and scared. I love your writings!
3Uchiha ChiIt's so GOOD! Oh my gosh! The chapters were a little short, but it was still fabulous. I love Peter in all of his cuteness and cuddlyness. Joel is amazing, and he's so melancholic and scared. I love your writings!
11/3/2008 c6 mypi
oh yeah, i liked it, but now some criticism
your writing is pretty good, what i'd say that it lacked detail, and no i don't mean rape scenes, you should give your story more feeling, it sounded more like a summary of a story
sorry if it was harsh, just felt like saying something
you should write more longer stories like that ^^
*hugs*
oh yeah, i liked it, but now some criticism
your writing is pretty good, what i'd say that it lacked detail, and no i don't mean rape scenes, you should give your story more feeling, it sounded more like a summary of a story
sorry if it was harsh, just felt like saying something
you should write more longer stories like that ^^
*hugs*
7/24/2007 c1 25justaguy
Of course you should continue. Keep writing. I, for one, want to know what is next. I like it. Thnx for having it. It actually kind of reminded me of something. Something happened to me and it brought it back. I just did not have someone to run to.
Take care.
jag
25justaguyOf course you should continue. Keep writing. I, for one, want to know what is next. I like it. Thnx for having it. It actually kind of reminded me of something. Something happened to me and it brought it back. I just did not have someone to run to.
Take care.
jag
2/19/2006 c6 30In Darkest Night
i can't believe you can even THINK it's bad! thats one of the most inspiring shounen-ai stories i've EVER read, EVER!
~night
30In Darkest Nighti can't believe you can even THINK it's bad! thats one of the most inspiring shounen-ai stories i've EVER read, EVER!
~night
2/1/2006 c6 13Artificial Refuge
Oh my God that's so cool! That's really really awesome and it's been finished off so well. :D
13Artificial RefugeOh my God that's so cool! That's really really awesome and it's been finished off so well. :D
2/1/2006 c6 ColdFrost
Very good! A great story.(Congrats on finishing :-) )
~CF
Very good! A great story.(Congrats on finishing :-) )
~CF
1/25/2005 c5 9Goddess Of Imaginary Life
WHAT! YOU CANT LEAVE ME HANGING.. Bad cliffy bad bad cliffy. Gr. Update otherwise I will send you a million annoying emails from the coll. :/ Get a move on. Why are you still reading this?
9Goddess Of Imaginary LifeWHAT! YOU CANT LEAVE ME HANGING.. Bad cliffy bad bad cliffy. Gr. Update otherwise I will send you a million annoying emails from the coll. :/ Get a move on. Why are you still reading this?
1/25/2005 c3 Goddess Of Imaginary Life
I'd hate lying to my lover (have they slept together yet?) I hate Joels fther. Evil bastard, EVIL!
I'd hate lying to my lover (have they slept together yet?) I hate Joels fther. Evil bastard, EVIL!
1/25/2005 c2 Goddess Of Imaginary Life
I didn't know men could... enter each other, as such. But then again, I dont know any male anatomy. Poor boys. :(
I didn't know men could... enter each other, as such. But then again, I dont know any male anatomy. Poor boys. :(
1/25/2005 c1 Goddess Of Imaginary Life
wow. Poor Joel. This is Elspeth the Brat by the way. I think this is really good.
wow. Poor Joel. This is Elspeth the Brat by the way. I think this is really good.