for The Don't Need It Stuff12/1/2007 c1 
34SunsetOrchids
Wow, that was kinda humbling^^ I liked it! Like we don't need what we have, and we as a society are always saying we could give up what we don't need, but when it's taken, we feel a little cheated...
34SunsetOrchidsWow, that was kinda humbling^^ I liked it! Like we don't need what we have, and we as a society are always saying we could give up what we don't need, but when it's taken, we feel a little cheated...
11/29/2007 c1 4Celtic Dancer
Brilliant.
Shows us how materialistic we really are, but the peom itself is fun to read. Nice job! :]
4Celtic DancerBrilliant.
Shows us how materialistic we really are, but the peom itself is fun to read. Nice job! :]
5/11/2005 c1 31Lynnie-Pooh
O, I liked how you put a rat in there instead of a person or Jesus or somthing religous like most people would do. It made it funny and cute. I liked it all. Keep writing.
31Lynnie-PoohO, I liked how you put a rat in there instead of a person or Jesus or somthing religous like most people would do. It made it funny and cute. I liked it all. Keep writing.
8/2/2004 c1 really-bad-egg
To be honest (as always) at first I thought this poem was going nowhere, but the end saved it, gave it a whole new perspective. Now I love it! Keep writing, k?
~Manda
To be honest (as always) at first I thought this poem was going nowhere, but the end saved it, gave it a whole new perspective. Now I love it! Keep writing, k?
~Manda
7/8/2004 c1 RONAQUA
MUAHAha tehe yuka yuka yuka giggle giggle giggle so cute funny like the one about trying to get out of school from ms.roberts class
MUAHAha tehe yuka yuka yuka giggle giggle giggle so cute funny like the one about trying to get out of school from ms.roberts class
7/5/2004 c1 Ravensblood
Teehee! Very funny! Now, I know there's a deep lesson in there somewhere...if I could only figure out what it is...
You know, with a talking rat at your disposal, you could make lots of cash to buy even more 'don't need it' stuff! ;D
Teehee! Very funny! Now, I know there's a deep lesson in there somewhere...if I could only figure out what it is...
You know, with a talking rat at your disposal, you could make lots of cash to buy even more 'don't need it' stuff! ;D
6/24/2004 c1 Words of Trees
That's cute. It flows pretty well, and I like the line about the chainsaw. That rat is bordering on philosophical.
That's cute. It flows pretty well, and I like the line about the chainsaw. That rat is bordering on philosophical.