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127Eirien
I like the way you mix concrete, detailed description with feelings and poetic expressions such as "the slender blade", which almost personifies the blade, hinting at the way the blade is like a companion, a confidant, a saviour to release from emotional pain that is worse than physical. You give a good portrayal of SH and the motivations behind it.
127EirienI like the way you mix concrete, detailed description with feelings and poetic expressions such as "the slender blade", which almost personifies the blade, hinting at the way the blade is like a companion, a confidant, a saviour to release from emotional pain that is worse than physical. You give a good portrayal of SH and the motivations behind it.