for When She Cried6/24/2004 c1 
127Eirien
Lovely. I like the analogy and sympathy between nature and the person described. And we tend to read our emotions into our surroundings, so when we cry the rain relly seems like tears. This is very poetic, and touching in a way. The parallel sentence strucutre and short sentences work really well, adding to that touch of simplicity. Beautiful, I like it.
127EirienLovely. I like the analogy and sympathy between nature and the person described. And we tend to read our emotions into our surroundings, so when we cry the rain relly seems like tears. This is very poetic, and touching in a way. The parallel sentence strucutre and short sentences work really well, adding to that touch of simplicity. Beautiful, I like it.