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for A bird without wings

7/14/2004 c1 someone
that was amazing. i love your writing style.
6/24/2004 c1 8Keyase
There is so much going on with this poem. I don't really know what you are getting at.
The inevitability of failure for some (bird without wings)? Is that why it is easier to hide? Second half I like.
The first half seems cut and pasted from different poems. I don't see the consistency.
6/24/2004 c1 6katiebuggie
Ok, being honest like you said, I thought it was so extraordinary. Beyond description! Lol. Lots of feeling. Keep it up!

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