for Roman Candles7/9/2004 c1 stephanie
left me speechless.
bravo.
left me speechless.
bravo.
6/28/2004 c1 
28Deluminated
Eerie. Great setting...I can't think of anything else to say. I'm still in awe over the effect of the setting.
28DeluminatedEerie. Great setting...I can't think of anything else to say. I'm still in awe over the effect of the setting.
6/25/2004 c1 10Lemon Drop
Oh my gosh. That seriously gave me chills. I love how you used such great imagery...I felt like I was there. I hope this isn't a real-life expirience. Please keep writing... you are obviously incredibly talented. I would say I love this story, but I don't. It scares me. But I do appreciate it, and your writing style is addicting. I have a very good feeling that this story was a one-shot.
But in any case, continue to write, and I'm sure I won't be the only one reading!
Lemon Drop
10Lemon DropOh my gosh. That seriously gave me chills. I love how you used such great imagery...I felt like I was there. I hope this isn't a real-life expirience. Please keep writing... you are obviously incredibly talented. I would say I love this story, but I don't. It scares me. But I do appreciate it, and your writing style is addicting. I have a very good feeling that this story was a one-shot.
But in any case, continue to write, and I'm sure I won't be the only one reading!
Lemon Drop
6/25/2004 c1 8nauticalstar
Pretty good. good descriptions and all it just seemed like a lazy beginning and a sumwhat intense end. Maybe if you add another chapter id get it or something
8nauticalstarPretty good. good descriptions and all it just seemed like a lazy beginning and a sumwhat intense end. Maybe if you add another chapter id get it or something