for Circles for Spades12/23/2006 c1 Red Rose
It's fab, darling :P
No, but seriously, it's really good! I loved this, and I got a little sad, because he can never have that man of his dreams T_T Ah well, friendship crushes end too, I suppose. :P Your portrayal of everything is very well done. Like their different personalities, his feelings, etc.
It's fab, darling :P
No, but seriously, it's really good! I loved this, and I got a little sad, because he can never have that man of his dreams T_T Ah well, friendship crushes end too, I suppose. :P Your portrayal of everything is very well done. Like their different personalities, his feelings, etc.
4/6/2006 c1 
12t h e m u s h r o o m
Ok. I cannot not leave a review for this, if it makes any sense. It's wonderful. It's just...I could say reliving. You have every story out there now pouring with sex or bad language [[um..I'm a hypocrite at that last statement, but moving on]] and yours...has none of that but it's great...it flows together && is so sweet && to the point...it's wonderful, as I said.
Happy Trails, Sire!the mushroom
12t h e m u s h r o o mOk. I cannot not leave a review for this, if it makes any sense. It's wonderful. It's just...I could say reliving. You have every story out there now pouring with sex or bad language [[um..I'm a hypocrite at that last statement, but moving on]] and yours...has none of that but it's great...it flows together && is so sweet && to the point...it's wonderful, as I said.
Happy Trails, Sire!the mushroom
4/7/2005 c1 jes
omg, can you plz, plz PLEASE write more. that was really really cute, squee
omg, can you plz, plz PLEASE write more. that was really really cute, squee
7/9/2004 c1 stephanie
i'm really starting to like your writing more and more, maybe you're maturing as an author, or maybe i'm changing, but it seems so much more.. i don't know, truthful, and.. really just wonderful.
i think i need sleep
i'm really starting to like your writing more and more, maybe you're maturing as an author, or maybe i'm changing, but it seems so much more.. i don't know, truthful, and.. really just wonderful.
i think i need sleep
6/29/2004 c1 Santurion
Cool! I hope there will be more chapters or sequel, although it seems like a one-shot. *sigh* Oh well.
Cool! I hope there will be more chapters or sequel, although it seems like a one-shot. *sigh* Oh well.
6/28/2004 c1 28Deluminated
I love this. I think I'll read more of your stuff...I read The Talking Staircase already, as well. I like the perspective you've given here, summarizing the dialogue without actually giving it. Makes more of an impression that you're in the character's head. And the Kurt Vonnegut detail is awesome, partly because you took the time to give the author of the type of book the girl reads during class, and it's just the sort of quirk an interested person would notice, and partly because I read Vonnegut.
Now that I've written a ridiculously long review, I'll just say: Great job.
28DeluminatedI love this. I think I'll read more of your stuff...I read The Talking Staircase already, as well. I like the perspective you've given here, summarizing the dialogue without actually giving it. Makes more of an impression that you're in the character's head. And the Kurt Vonnegut detail is awesome, partly because you took the time to give the author of the type of book the girl reads during class, and it's just the sort of quirk an interested person would notice, and partly because I read Vonnegut.
Now that I've written a ridiculously long review, I'll just say: Great job.
6/25/2004 c1 Megumi87
Wow...i can compare myself quite well to Billy. I've had a crush...
Actually I have one now. ^^, but anyway, this story is great! I like this story and I can't wait until you update again.
Wow...i can compare myself quite well to Billy. I've had a crush...
Actually I have one now. ^^, but anyway, this story is great! I like this story and I can't wait until you update again.
6/25/2004 c1 fantasydrifter2003
Dude! This is really cool. I can totally relate to this. I have the same emotions for this on guy at my school. I can't stop thinking about him. He's been my crush for like ever. The thing for me is is that I've never even spoken a word to him before. I don't even know if he's gay lol. Anyways good short story.
Dude! This is really cool. I can totally relate to this. I have the same emotions for this on guy at my school. I can't stop thinking about him. He's been my crush for like ever. The thing for me is is that I've never even spoken a word to him before. I don't even know if he's gay lol. Anyways good short story.