for The First Son3/14/2010 c5 Abbie
Too bad this story died. Great plot line and writing. But I guess chances of you updating are slim :(
Too bad this story died. Great plot line and writing. But I guess chances of you updating are slim :(
12/29/2006 c5 
11.4.5.6.7
AW! Yeah! they kissed! yeah! please keep writing this one, *hands and knees begging here!* please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please
you know you want to.
11.4.5.6.7AW! Yeah! they kissed! yeah! please keep writing this one, *hands and knees begging here!* please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please
you know you want to.
2/22/2006 c5 REGRETABLE
heehee, update soon, it's funny, i like it, and i hope she does still stay sarcastic around him, the relationship's moving a bit too fast... just update soon tho!
heehee, update soon, it's funny, i like it, and i hope she does still stay sarcastic around him, the relationship's moving a bit too fast... just update soon tho!
6/20/2005 c1 Deanna
OMG great stroy, you must must must keep it going, i love it.
OMG great stroy, you must must must keep it going, i love it.
5/10/2005 c5 books4me
Hi,
Nice story.
I like the idea of Hannah not knowing that Chase is the president's son.
The end of chapter 4 (Shopping Spree!) is pretty neat, but somewhat rushed. However, the wall collapsing was a great idea. (Funny, though, that she'd kiss him and then throw him against the wall.)
I read a book where the president's son's name was Chase. I think it's somehow fitting.
Keep up the great work,
* Books4mE *
Hi,
Nice story.
I like the idea of Hannah not knowing that Chase is the president's son.
The end of chapter 4 (Shopping Spree!) is pretty neat, but somewhat rushed. However, the wall collapsing was a great idea. (Funny, though, that she'd kiss him and then throw him against the wall.)
I read a book where the president's son's name was Chase. I think it's somehow fitting.
Keep up the great work,
* Books4mE *
11/28/2004 c5 Sani
the story is great but there are some grammar mistakes keeping updating!
the story is great but there are some grammar mistakes keeping updating!
9/2/2004 c5 Noel17
omg this is so funny... keep it up! does the wall fall down on top of sumone or what?
lol
omg this is so funny... keep it up! does the wall fall down on top of sumone or what?
lol
8/10/2004 c5 5Itsinthacan16
Dang Hannah, rough much? haha. She must be hella horny. lol. But this was a good chapter! Keep going girl! Later ~Maggie
5Itsinthacan16Dang Hannah, rough much? haha. She must be hella horny. lol. But this was a good chapter! Keep going girl! Later ~Maggie
8/9/2004 c5 9Phoebe Love
I must agree with Chase-this was inevitable! Oh, I loved this chapter and update as soon as you can!
Feebs
9Phoebe LoveI must agree with Chase-this was inevitable! Oh, I loved this chapter and update as soon as you can!
Feebs
8/3/2004 c4 5Itsinthacan16
This is so good! Update soon homie! Later ~Maggie
PS I think this might even be as good or better then Obvious! We shall see! :oD
5Itsinthacan16This is so good! Update soon homie! Later ~Maggie
PS I think this might even be as good or better then Obvious! We shall see! :oD
7/29/2004 c4 D. Wilder
i love this story. keep it going! update soon.
i love this story. keep it going! update soon.