12/6/2004 c1 33Scnd
reminds me of a techno/rap lyric, nice, i really like it

7/16/2004 c1 25esperanzamor
cool - very good - i luv the last line too - and i have no idea what it means - must look up penultimate - is it even a word? and its short, short is good - its what poetry should be, hinting at things - and i can't be bothered to read anything long

1/6/2001 c1 12Spiritual Rock
It doesn't have to make sense, it just has to be!

1/5/2001 c1 91unwritten
i didn't quit get it