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12/28/2005 c1 18Plinky
Aww, that's really really lovely. Beautifully written - your words are so gentle, and the descriptions are perfect.

The characters are very well developed for a one shot - nice to see.

Lovely piece of writing! ; )
9/14/2004 c1 36Windsong
All together now: Aw. ^^
And I don't mean that sarcastically! This was a heart-warming story, especially since this shows a different side of your characters - one I didn't expect to see. I liked it a lot - and, like always, I love your writing. Keep on! -Windsong
7/15/2004 c1 Snarks
Thanks for the review on Under Darker Skies. Fitting that I share the love, ne? *grins*
Wonderfully descriptive. Though it's one part of another world, it's very self-contained. I am, of course, curious as to how this world of yours works so when I get a bit more time, I'm more than certain that I'll be reading more. Until then, know that this was a haunting and beautiful peace.
Well done.
7/2/2004 c1 cheer-cheer
oh, shimoyo! That is just too cute! *hugs them both* yay! All the adorableness... I love it! *hug for you too* and... yay!
6/30/2004 c1 5Dracorum
T_T so cute...
I'm glad you're writing about the seraphs again, hope you update soon!
6/30/2004 c1 3Ahrihliir
Aww, it's so sweet! Hmm, I don't think I've read any of the other stories, but now you've got me thoroughly interested, and I shall read them all! Mwahaha! ...Anyway, I never realized what a fantastically talented writer you were! I really loved this story. There was just one thing that you might want to fix: The first two paragraphs both began the same way. It's something I have a problem with too. It's just a matter of rearranging words. English is flexible like that ^_~
6/30/2004 c1 3Hope Moore
Well put togetherr. intresting. I almost fell as though I am there, I like those kind of stories! Keep in touch and check out my story The Window!

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