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9/17/2004 c1 120tabiboi
Switching from every other line being "And you don't even care" to anything on every line was a little confusing, but you tied it together nicely at the end. Good Job:)
7/6/2004 c1 lostontheroof
Not bad, keep on writing. Youve got a lot of potential.This has a lot of emaotion. And that you for spoiling me with the wonderful reviews!
-Sam
7/3/2004 c1 6Goldensong
Random! But cool. Poems about pain/suffering/death etc are always good!
7/1/2004 c1 57Kali Aja
Sad. deep to. keep writing!
7/1/2004 c1 4SilverAndFlames
Very Very good. Well Done.
6/30/2004 c1 C. Frost
Very, very good.
i like your repitition (sp?).
Please dont take it off!
6/30/2004 c1 41Stefen
Aww! Sweetie that was awesome! Write more!
6/30/2004 c1 3Cry Tears of Darkness
so true... some ppl suck and dont care. youre better than that, dont need them. i like this. relatable.
6/30/2004 c1 2BlueAngel0104
IDk, I liked it a lot. I think that'd make a really good song . . . Don't take it off! Keep writing!
I'd be honored if you'd read and review my original fiction that I posted on this site. Thanks in advance!

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