for You Don't Even Care9/17/2004 c1 
120tabiboi
Switching from every other line being "And you don't even care" to anything on every line was a little confusing, but you tied it together nicely at the end. Good Job:)
120tabiboiSwitching from every other line being "And you don't even care" to anything on every line was a little confusing, but you tied it together nicely at the end. Good Job:)
7/6/2004 c1 lostontheroof
Not bad, keep on writing. Youve got a lot of potential.This has a lot of emaotion. And that you for spoiling me with the wonderful reviews!
-Sam
Not bad, keep on writing. Youve got a lot of potential.This has a lot of emaotion. And that you for spoiling me with the wonderful reviews!
-Sam
6/30/2004 c1 C. Frost
Very, very good.
i like your repitition (sp?).
Please dont take it off!
Very, very good.
i like your repitition (sp?).
Please dont take it off!
6/30/2004 c1 3Cry Tears of Darkness
so true... some ppl suck and dont care. youre better than that, dont need them. i like this. relatable.
3Cry Tears of Darknessso true... some ppl suck and dont care. youre better than that, dont need them. i like this. relatable.
6/30/2004 c1 2BlueAngel0104
IDk, I liked it a lot. I think that'd make a really good song . . . Don't take it off! Keep writing!
I'd be honored if you'd read and review my original fiction that I posted on this site. Thanks in advance!
2BlueAngel0104IDk, I liked it a lot. I think that'd make a really good song . . . Don't take it off! Keep writing!
I'd be honored if you'd read and review my original fiction that I posted on this site. Thanks in advance!