for What You've Become7/1/2004 c1 
22PheonixSlayer
I don't think you should've put commas in some of the places you did, but other than that, it's cool. I hope you're not talking to anyone I know. :)
22PheonixSlayerI don't think you should've put commas in some of the places you did, but other than that, it's cool. I hope you're not talking to anyone I know. :)