for Poor Babe8/24/2005 c1 Sally-andersonn
Yes, i agree. ONly nothingness is pure. Captures society making babies bad very well. What tune does it go with?
Yes, i agree. ONly nothingness is pure. Captures society making babies bad very well. What tune does it go with?
7/24/2005 c1 FrozenKiwi
I really like it. Especially the last few lines. Very well done! (and thanks for the reviews!)
I really like it. Especially the last few lines. Very well done! (and thanks for the reviews!)
5/26/2005 c1 Clap Clap Raise Your Hands
interesting idea, i had like this fantastic rhythm in my head all the way until the middle, but hey, if i could hear the music i'm sure it would make more sense, i hope this sounds like Creed or something like that, i think that would sound really nice with like a rough voice singing about something so innocent and beautiful. I like the last lines most, even though they're really true and sad i like them, they're beautiful in their own right. Guy i wrote my poem for: nothing ever happened and never would have but i HAD to tell him because i felt he should know, even though i knew he liked me, life is so complicated sometimes! :) x weasel within x
interesting idea, i had like this fantastic rhythm in my head all the way until the middle, but hey, if i could hear the music i'm sure it would make more sense, i hope this sounds like Creed or something like that, i think that would sound really nice with like a rough voice singing about something so innocent and beautiful. I like the last lines most, even though they're really true and sad i like them, they're beautiful in their own right. Guy i wrote my poem for: nothing ever happened and never would have but i HAD to tell him because i felt he should know, even though i knew he liked me, life is so complicated sometimes! :) x weasel within x
1/21/2005 c1 
131Nizzles
Holy FUCK. This is the most awesome thing ever. You speak truth so well, god this is amazing. Totally going on my favourites. Keep up the kickass work!
131NizzlesHoly FUCK. This is the most awesome thing ever. You speak truth so well, god this is amazing. Totally going on my favourites. Keep up the kickass work!
7/30/2004 c1 52Kristal
Kewl! That was kinda like mine... you should go and become a famous song writer! lol! But you could honest!
*Pist* Thanx for all the revies, made my day!
52KristalKewl! That was kinda like mine... you should go and become a famous song writer! lol! But you could honest!
*Pist* Thanx for all the revies, made my day!
7/28/2004 c1 magicnina
'make it mold it lacerate it'-
just beautiful. This must be really good sung out loud.
'make it mold it lacerate it'-
just beautiful. This must be really good sung out loud.