for Treasure9/14/2004 c1 
52Lancealot
Amazingly true how some just keep what you tell them as treasures to almost hold as if they were pure gold, then there are those that don't even see them as worth. Thanks for the review! Hope to read more of your work as time allows!
52LancealotAmazingly true how some just keep what you tell them as treasures to almost hold as if they were pure gold, then there are those that don't even see them as worth. Thanks for the review! Hope to read more of your work as time allows!
8/1/2004 c1 64Juliet Squared
Another sad one. Well written though- I love the reference to gems and diamonds.
64Juliet SquaredAnother sad one. Well written though- I love the reference to gems and diamonds.
7/25/2004 c1 32C.K. Sarvis
Wow, I just realized I well eventually stumble onto a poem that reminds me of Richelle, oh well, I'm sure it will be very beautiful if its written by you. Like this one. This was one of your fewer rhyming poems, and it was good.
-Derek
32C.K. SarvisWow, I just realized I well eventually stumble onto a poem that reminds me of Richelle, oh well, I'm sure it will be very beautiful if its written by you. Like this one. This was one of your fewer rhyming poems, and it was good.
-Derek
7/7/2004 c1 Ajna
This was amazing, I liked it! Thank you for reviewing and suggesting I read your work. =] I'll try my best to read and review the rest of your stuff. Keep up the good work!
Kudos and Kisses,
Anathema Ceres
This was amazing, I liked it! Thank you for reviewing and suggesting I read your work. =] I'll try my best to read and review the rest of your stuff. Keep up the good work!
Kudos and Kisses,
Anathema Ceres
7/5/2004 c1 kingboat
Good, good, (but now I'm depressed)
Good, good, (but now I'm depressed)
7/3/2004 c1 70Knavish Fiend
it is quite an interesting concept i have to admit... are those murmurs from her heart whispers of love and affection? or literally murmurs that a doctor should look at? well, other then that it's beautifuly written, full marks!
70Knavish Fiendit is quite an interesting concept i have to admit... are those murmurs from her heart whispers of love and affection? or literally murmurs that a doctor should look at? well, other then that it's beautifuly written, full marks!
7/3/2004 c1 12Bleachedclouds
That is a lovely poem ^^
At first I was slightly wary of the request to read your poem left in a review of mine (Thank you by the way ^^ Review much appreciated!) but it was worth the trip well done!
My only complaint was that it wasn't longer!
Lovely imagery. Depp and pretty. 8/10!
12BleachedcloudsThat is a lovely poem ^^
At first I was slightly wary of the request to read your poem left in a review of mine (Thank you by the way ^^ Review much appreciated!) but it was worth the trip well done!
My only complaint was that it wasn't longer!
Lovely imagery. Depp and pretty. 8/10!
7/3/2004 c1 49SleepDontWeep
beautiful! the secrets as diamonds comparason wuz just amazing because all secrets r hidden in ur heart like diamonds in a mine! please keep writing i love your style: calm,meaningful yet gripping. if u cud will u pleaz check out sum of my storys? plz! i really want opinions cuz i dont no if dey r any gud! luk in my profile if u r going 2 read them tanx! lov ya gretchen 45xx
49SleepDontWeepbeautiful! the secrets as diamonds comparason wuz just amazing because all secrets r hidden in ur heart like diamonds in a mine! please keep writing i love your style: calm,meaningful yet gripping. if u cud will u pleaz check out sum of my storys? plz! i really want opinions cuz i dont no if dey r any gud! luk in my profile if u r going 2 read them tanx! lov ya gretchen 45xx
7/3/2004 c1 93daughter of kemet
This is a great poem. It is also very right that someone who doesn't understand their own worth that words spoken from their heart are the greatest treasures on
earth. If only to the person who is speaking them. If you hadn't already posted the poem here I would encourge you to enter your poem at Poetry.com .
93daughter of kemetThis is a great poem. It is also very right that someone who doesn't understand their own worth that words spoken from their heart are the greatest treasures on
earth. If only to the person who is speaking them. If you hadn't already posted the poem here I would encourge you to enter your poem at Poetry.com .
7/3/2004 c1 9icklemonsterr
wow! i totally sympathise with you. i know what it feels like, and wish my friends could also percieve my problems wich they have the honour of sharing with such beauty. thankyou for sharing such special feelings with me.
hannah xx
9icklemonsterrwow! i totally sympathise with you. i know what it feels like, and wish my friends could also percieve my problems wich they have the honour of sharing with such beauty. thankyou for sharing such special feelings with me.
hannah xx
7/2/2004 c1 Seemcha Leeva
Very nice! It makes you think about what everyone has to say and what not. Kind of chilling I guess you would say. I don't know if you did this on purpose or not, but the imperfect rhyme makes it even cooler, like there are no words to express the emotions. Very very good!
Very nice! It makes you think about what everyone has to say and what not. Kind of chilling I guess you would say. I don't know if you did this on purpose or not, but the imperfect rhyme makes it even cooler, like there are no words to express the emotions. Very very good!
7/2/2004 c1 Cheli
I guess that it's all a matter of perspective... although you do make a good point.
I guess that it's all a matter of perspective... although you do make a good point.
7/2/2004 c1 4ComeBackToCamden
its pretty and it works and actually has some depth to it, which is hard to acheive. i might not understand what it means to you personally but, as with all poetry, its got its own little meaning for me, and its struck a chord somewhere.
thanks for the reveiw - by the way, how do you get like cetred and bold and italic text etc? cause yours looks pretty ^_^
take care and keep writing
e
x
4ComeBackToCamdenits pretty and it works and actually has some depth to it, which is hard to acheive. i might not understand what it means to you personally but, as with all poetry, its got its own little meaning for me, and its struck a chord somewhere.
thanks for the reveiw - by the way, how do you get like cetred and bold and italic text etc? cause yours looks pretty ^_^
take care and keep writing
e
x
7/2/2004 c1 36Zeroduero
wow. Its nice. I can really relate to it now cause I'm kinda going through the same things. :D its nice.
36Zeroduerowow. Its nice. I can really relate to it now cause I'm kinda going through the same things. :D its nice.
7/2/2004 c1 1Francophony
First of all, I want to truly thank you for your review. I really can't put into words how good that made me feel. Thank you so very much, and thanks for making me feel welcome here!
Now, on to your lovely poem:
I love how you compare the secrets that you share to precious jewels, the gems that only a precious few are allowed to view. You convey a sense of trust with your friends, though they may not see it that way. What they deem a burden is, in fact, an honor in your eyes. You make it clear that they are the ones who will truly know you. If you haven't shown them this poem, maybe you should. Knowing that you appreciate their trust might turn their outlook around. I loved this poem! :D
P.S. I'm unfortunately not from Quebec, though I do speak a little French. The U.S. is my home, but that doesn't mean I won't check out your story! Maybe I might even be able to recognize a few places you mention. ;D
1FrancophonyFirst of all, I want to truly thank you for your review. I really can't put into words how good that made me feel. Thank you so very much, and thanks for making me feel welcome here!
Now, on to your lovely poem:
I love how you compare the secrets that you share to precious jewels, the gems that only a precious few are allowed to view. You convey a sense of trust with your friends, though they may not see it that way. What they deem a burden is, in fact, an honor in your eyes. You make it clear that they are the ones who will truly know you. If you haven't shown them this poem, maybe you should. Knowing that you appreciate their trust might turn their outlook around. I loved this poem! :D
P.S. I'm unfortunately not from Quebec, though I do speak a little French. The U.S. is my home, but that doesn't mean I won't check out your story! Maybe I might even be able to recognize a few places you mention. ;D