for Questions7/15/2004 c1 
3sassw14
very well put. the person seemed well i don't know i have a hard time reviewing poetry. but i liked it.
3sassw14very well put. the person seemed well i don't know i have a hard time reviewing poetry. but i liked it.
7/15/2004 c1 13lostontheroof
This isn't too bad. I think you're being to hard on yourself in this poem. Why do you think no one cares about you? Keep writing, ok?
13lostontheroofThis isn't too bad. I think you're being to hard on yourself in this poem. Why do you think no one cares about you? Keep writing, ok?
7/15/2004 c1 2Sheila Ibre
Yes, my favourite sort of poetry: contradictory and retorical (or is it? Seriously I'm not sure.) Nevermind.
I like the idea though! Especially the repeated parts!
2Sheila IbreYes, my favourite sort of poetry: contradictory and retorical (or is it? Seriously I'm not sure.) Nevermind.
I like the idea though! Especially the repeated parts!
7/3/2004 c1 5PriestSnatcher
I love how you composed this poem and conveyed your emotions mainly through questions. You are very good at showing your emotions without flat out telling us everything. I felt this one. Good job! ^_^
~HJ
5PriestSnatcherI love how you composed this poem and conveyed your emotions mainly through questions. You are very good at showing your emotions without flat out telling us everything. I felt this one. Good job! ^_^
~HJ