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11/7/2005 c1 taryn
hey candie, its me! i read ur poem n i wanted to tell u that u titled this poem no emotion, when really all ur talking about is the sad feelings that you've never had. hurt, betrayel, loss. those arnt the only emotions that there are. if you want to make this title go with the poem you might want to title it like no sadness, or something, you no? i just thought i might let u no what i felt. other than that, it was great. i've just been reading ur stuff and thought this would b a good one to review. love you lots my candie cane! kisses xoxoxoxo
8/30/2004 c1 30Silvra Gregorio
*hugs* i know what you mean...don't worry, one day it'll be your's too. hugs! beautifully written...great meter.
Have faith in your self...and trust the lord. all will come to you soon. Hugs!
Bear
7/7/2004 c1 1x0x-Still-Alive-x0x
That was good =)
~~*Nid*~~

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