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11/15/2004 c1 Blank1379
I will refrain from giving you a lecture on how death is not just an empty hourglass. Not a very optimistic outlook on life, huh, but it's the way some people feel, I guess. Sorry, just have to quote Picard. "Someone once told me that time is a predator that stalks us all our lives. But I prefer to think of time as a companion who goes with us on the journey, reminding us to treasure each moment, because it will never come again."
8/24/2004 c1 128i-kill-4-fun
"my life as a hollow hourglass" the title for the story of my life
7/28/2004 c1 81daphnegray78
Great poem. I especially liked the ending...it just resonates with finality. Awesome work.
7/13/2004 c1 15AmberBloom
So deep,good stuff! Love the comparison and repitition, you used it well! I love LOTR btw! book and movie (AmberBLOOM- Orlando Bloom- Legolas)
anywho, like your work, it's really good, keep writing!
7/10/2004 c1 612simpleplan13
Every second another gain of sand falls,... grain
Very true and nice metaphor
7/7/2004 c1 13hauntingtheliving
i like it alot ^ ^ i like the way you wrote it and all that, and the actual meaning to it ^_^
7/3/2004 c1 Brandy Bear
aw brandy likes this one i love the way you worte it beginning the next line with what was in the last part of the line before it that is hard to do and well i cant do it so you earn bouns points for that and i love the idea
7/3/2004 c1 5Bleedingtree
i love it! i love how you made the next line start with the end of the previous line! it's awesome! absolutely fantabulous! sorry i haven't reviewed anything of yours for a while, been wallowing in shame and self pitty and depression. but i'm back and i shall do my best!

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