for Watching Ever9/5/2004 c1 
29Edward Uwnhai Silverfang
This was beautiful and very touching, and also the contest part, what a load of bull, poor you. But I'm glad it made you write such a wonderful poem that I could find.
-Eddie ^_^
29Edward Uwnhai SilverfangThis was beautiful and very touching, and also the contest part, what a load of bull, poor you. But I'm glad it made you write such a wonderful poem that I could find.
-Eddie ^_^
8/10/2004 c1 42Emmytastic gal
i absoluely love this poem. its totally amazing. your rhythm is really cool, and you have a very distinct style. ya and about the contests... ones that make you pay entrance fee's are fake. I enter lots and most of the ones that are free... and DONT make you pay for a book if your poems slected, are real. try entering Creative Commnuication's contest. I know for sure they don't charge and they're real. go to: http:/w.poeticpower.com- i'm pretty sure thats it. write on.
42Emmytastic gali absoluely love this poem. its totally amazing. your rhythm is really cool, and you have a very distinct style. ya and about the contests... ones that make you pay entrance fee's are fake. I enter lots and most of the ones that are free... and DONT make you pay for a book if your poems slected, are real. try entering Creative Commnuication's contest. I know for sure they don't charge and they're real. go to: http:/w.poeticpower.com- i'm pretty sure thats it. write on.
7/28/2004 c1 magicnina
Tha is a really amazing poem. Try entering it in a competition where you DON"T have to pay (that's just bogus). The line 'mind is fat' seems like you stretched for rhyme just a tad but hey, its still good. I think I'll check out some of your other stuff now too.
(you love the calling? Then I officially love you! Two is the best album in the world...)
Tha is a really amazing poem. Try entering it in a competition where you DON"T have to pay (that's just bogus). The line 'mind is fat' seems like you stretched for rhyme just a tad but hey, its still good. I think I'll check out some of your other stuff now too.
(you love the calling? Then I officially love you! Two is the best album in the world...)