10/1/2005 c2 2Billthegeek
This is great stuff! A fantastic mix of crazy characters and equally insane story line! Write more!
This is great stuff! A fantastic mix of crazy characters and equally insane story line! Write more!
8/25/2004 c5 59Ixel the Pixel
I really like the plot to this story! I also enjoyed the uniqueness of all your characters. Please update soon! :)
I really like the plot to this story! I also enjoyed the uniqueness of all your characters. Please update soon! :)
8/22/2004 c2 11wyldcat
Okay, this is slightly confusing, but it's really cool! It gets confusing when you skip around a lot but in the second chapter I think I'm getting the hang of reading bits of separate stories. You know the school part, with the girl who was getting expelled - it reminds me of X-Men 2, at the end when the humans freeze... you following me? Anyway... no, there's nothing wrong with that, of course. It's probably been done before, therefore it's not copyrighted or anything...heh. Anyway, I'll come back and finish reading later!
Okay, this is slightly confusing, but it's really cool! It gets confusing when you skip around a lot but in the second chapter I think I'm getting the hang of reading bits of separate stories. You know the school part, with the girl who was getting expelled - it reminds me of X-Men 2, at the end when the humans freeze... you following me? Anyway... no, there's nothing wrong with that, of course. It's probably been done before, therefore it's not copyrighted or anything...heh. Anyway, I'll come back and finish reading later!
8/9/2004 c5 17Cattails
Wow. That definitely does explain everything. So Damien's s'posed to be the hopeful and angelic one, hm? Still love the story!
Wow. That definitely does explain everything. So Damien's s'posed to be the hopeful and angelic one, hm? Still love the story!
8/2/2004 c4 Cattails
This is an AWESOME story! I especially like how you started it out, with each little story. Damien's great! (The annoying ones are the most entertaining!). Can't wait for more!
~*CAT*~
This is an AWESOME story! I especially like how you started it out, with each little story. Damien's great! (The annoying ones are the most entertaining!). Can't wait for more!
~*CAT*~
7/23/2004 c4 3Larania Mahera
OH NO! This is the last chapter up. I "Need" to know what's going to happen next. Please update very soon. If you don't then i won't be able to review anymore.
OH NO! This is the last chapter up. I "Need" to know what's going to happen next. Please update very soon. If you don't then i won't be able to review anymore.
7/23/2004 c3 Larania Mahera
lol, it is very funny. I like the way, what was his name, Damien? talks. It's almost as cool as the way the Irish talk. I love the Irish accent. Sorry, i got off on a tangent. I like the story.
lol, it is very funny. I like the way, what was his name, Damien? talks. It's almost as cool as the way the Irish talk. I love the Irish accent. Sorry, i got off on a tangent. I like the story.
7/23/2004 c1 Larania Mahera
Quite interesting. Although, it's quite a lot of different scenes. I hope that they are connected soon in some way.
Quite interesting. Although, it's quite a lot of different scenes. I hope that they are connected soon in some way.
7/21/2004 c2 Lexi
This is an awesome story! Plz update ASAP! :)
This is an awesome story! Plz update ASAP! :)
7/21/2004 c2 sevendeadlypings
This story is pretty interesting. Will you be updating anytime soon? And thanks for reviewing Shijhanne.
This story is pretty interesting. Will you be updating anytime soon? And thanks for reviewing Shijhanne.
7/9/2004 c1 4Neveah Snow
I tried to review earlier and I kept getting this message that said the system is overloaded...
anyway...
My real name is Kelly (teehee) I like the fire one... with Kelly in it :) it's very well written and, even though it's only a paragraph it is definately a great hook! :) write more
I tried to review earlier and I kept getting this message that said the system is overloaded...
anyway...
My real name is Kelly (teehee) I like the fire one... with Kelly in it :) it's very well written and, even though it's only a paragraph it is definately a great hook! :) write more
7/9/2004 c2 Neveah Snow
heehee... my real name is Kelly :)
I like some of these alot... the one about stopping the fire was great :) it was very well written
heehee... my real name is Kelly :)
I like some of these alot... the one about stopping the fire was great :) it was very well written