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11/30/2004 c1 SleeplessWitch
Wow, that was really something Sisi. That almost made me cry, and I don't cry often so congrats and kudos to you. The whole butterfly and comparing it to crushed dreams of innocent children is amazing the way you put it. Great job.
8/6/2004 c1 7Ini Rini
Whoa geez, I wasn't expecting that. You conveyed the poem really well. Nice job Ariri. You pratically lured into its innocence at the begining, but at the end. Completely threw me off.
7/18/2004 c1 39Finwe
Very touching, really makes you think
7/5/2004 c1 17shadow-spirit
sad but true. an ode to the loss of child hood. a clever analogy. an apt point!
7/4/2004 c1 9EmeraldEyes89
Really good! I Love it...and I especially loved it cuz it mentioned butterflies (im obsessed with butterflies)
~Amanda~
7/4/2004 c1 falconstrife86
OMG this was good! I almost cried while I was reading it. It's beautiful! Well done. ^_^
7/4/2004 c1 7flowers
That is so beautiful and true. Damn, it makes me want to give you a big hug and rent disney-world out for you for a year.
It's sad but pulling emotion out of a person is what it's all about. I felt it so you're doing something really really right.
You have talent, always use it.
7/4/2004 c1 101Benjamin Gainsborough
That was very good! It makes a lot of sense!

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