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8/31/2004 c1 44Serene Waters
Very good! It has a sweet soothing rythm, of course that's the idea of a lullaby but you acomplished it very well! It has a very comforting edge to it. Awesome!
7/12/2004 c1 3Marisa Rae
I love it! It has great rhythm, and is very sweat! Although, you might want to consider taking out the "s" in "dreams". I really like the part that says "till night and morning meet"! And I think the last two lines end it very nicely!

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