for Lullaby8/31/2004 c1 
44Serene Waters
Very good! It has a sweet soothing rythm, of course that's the idea of a lullaby but you acomplished it very well! It has a very comforting edge to it. Awesome!
44Serene WatersVery good! It has a sweet soothing rythm, of course that's the idea of a lullaby but you acomplished it very well! It has a very comforting edge to it. Awesome!
7/12/2004 c1 3Marisa Rae
I love it! It has great rhythm, and is very sweat! Although, you might want to consider taking out the "s" in "dreams". I really like the part that says "till night and morning meet"! And I think the last two lines end it very nicely!
3Marisa RaeI love it! It has great rhythm, and is very sweat! Although, you might want to consider taking out the "s" in "dreams". I really like the part that says "till night and morning meet"! And I think the last two lines end it very nicely!