
12/2/2010 c11 pterodactylion
OH NO
I just realised if you haven't updated in 3 years, it probably means you won't update any time soon, either.
):
PLEASE D: upon reading this review...please, pretty, pretty pleassee? write another chapter? for me? please? for the girl who shares the same name as the protagonist? please?
i swear. isn't Rita italian? i mean, now that i think about it, it DOES sound quite India, but I also know for a fact that it originates from "Margarita" - which is Italian, but the name "Margarita" actually originates from Spain. So technically, Margarita is Spanish and Indian. But I DO remember something about hebrew?
Hahaha...update? :3
OH NO
I just realised if you haven't updated in 3 years, it probably means you won't update any time soon, either.
):
PLEASE D: upon reading this review...please, pretty, pretty pleassee? write another chapter? for me? please? for the girl who shares the same name as the protagonist? please?
i swear. isn't Rita italian? i mean, now that i think about it, it DOES sound quite India, but I also know for a fact that it originates from "Margarita" - which is Italian, but the name "Margarita" actually originates from Spain. So technically, Margarita is Spanish and Indian. But I DO remember something about hebrew?
Hahaha...update? :3
12/2/2010 c4 pterodactylion
NO! I'm getting mixed up between ALEXANDER and LEX D: D:
I'm sorry, I must be bothering you with reviews from a story you wrote 3 years ago. But I feel the ned to ):
NO! I'm getting mixed up between ALEXANDER and LEX D: D:
I'm sorry, I must be bothering you with reviews from a story you wrote 3 years ago. But I feel the ned to ):
12/2/2010 c3 pterodactylion
But I'm not indian ): which makes me sad, cos, you know - TWINSEYSS YEAH
No, I'm Asian. Not Indian.
And I live in Australia. Not U.S.
):
This makes me sad - sniffle -
WHY CAN'T MY LIFE/NAME/PERSON BE THE SAME AS RITA GILL'S?
Hahaha, it's a great story (:
But I'm not indian ): which makes me sad, cos, you know - TWINSEYSS YEAH
No, I'm Asian. Not Indian.
And I live in Australia. Not U.S.
):
This makes me sad - sniffle -
WHY CAN'T MY LIFE/NAME/PERSON BE THE SAME AS RITA GILL'S?
Hahaha, it's a great story (:
12/1/2010 c1 pterodactylion
OHMYGODOHMYGODOHMYGOD I LOVE YOU DJFLKASJDF;LAKJDSFADF
never mind why ;D
um. this is also a pretty good story.
asdfghjkl;
okay, never mind about stalkers. MY NAME IS RITA TO 8D
so that explains my excitement, because i don't know any other person with the same name as me. but whatevs. RITA :) WOOHOO
OHMYGODOHMYGODOHMYGOD I LOVE YOU DJFLKASJDF;LAKJDSFADF
never mind why ;D
um. this is also a pretty good story.
asdfghjkl;
okay, never mind about stalkers. MY NAME IS RITA TO 8D
so that explains my excitement, because i don't know any other person with the same name as me. but whatevs. RITA :) WOOHOO
11/20/2010 c11 dsjifhs
Rita and Lex centric is good (: very good -nods-
best wishes on continuing the story~
Rita and Lex centric is good (: very good -nods-
best wishes on continuing the story~
10/13/2010 c1 mahi
Hey!Complete the story please.I'm an Indian too.from Kerala.And it's been a change reading about us people.Please..
Hey!Complete the story please.I'm an Indian too.from Kerala.And it's been a change reading about us people.Please..
6/18/2010 c11 Capucine
AH WHY HAS THIS NOT BEEN UPDATED? THREE YEARS WOMAN! THREE! *virtually sticks 3 fingers in face* YOU MUST UPDATE!
...please? :D
AH WHY HAS THIS NOT BEEN UPDATED? THREE YEARS WOMAN! THREE! *virtually sticks 3 fingers in face* YOU MUST UPDATE!
...please? :D
2/26/2010 c11 Bubbly Girl
This is so good! PLEASE update soon! :)
Peace, Love and Happiness!
-Bubbly Girl
This is so good! PLEASE update soon! :)
Peace, Love and Happiness!
-Bubbly Girl
1/26/2010 c11 sarcasm is my middle name
Great! Absolutely wonderful, i love it! That is some seriously original shit...
Umm... random comments:
The Tash/'Xander' rape thing... tad creepy, but important.
About the Kashmir thing, have you watched Fanaa starring Aamir Khan?
I'm an Indian (moved to Aus when i was 6) and I think India's modernized now...
Yes a B is 'bad' and arranged marriages are the norm, but women have a say!
I know Rita likes Lex... so why is she perving on Alexander and Raven?
Thanks so much AND UPDATE SOON!
Great! Absolutely wonderful, i love it! That is some seriously original shit...
Umm... random comments:
The Tash/'Xander' rape thing... tad creepy, but important.
About the Kashmir thing, have you watched Fanaa starring Aamir Khan?
I'm an Indian (moved to Aus when i was 6) and I think India's modernized now...
Yes a B is 'bad' and arranged marriages are the norm, but women have a say!
I know Rita likes Lex... so why is she perving on Alexander and Raven?
Thanks so much AND UPDATE SOON!
1/18/2010 c11 xoxo anne
please please please update! D:
I'm about ready to DIE if you don't update soon.
please please please update! D:
I'm about ready to DIE if you don't update soon.
6/14/2009 c11
2EchoedShadows
This is one of the best stories ever! I don't know exactely why... but I'm really into this story and can't wait for the next chapter!

This is one of the best stories ever! I don't know exactely why... but I'm really into this story and can't wait for the next chapter!
6/6/2009 c11 Night-Rayne
this is really good but also really disturbing at the same time (the whole Alexander thing)
this is really good but also really disturbing at the same time (the whole Alexander thing)