
7/30/2006 c9 amelia
this story is really awesome! please say that you aren't going on a trip in early August, like some other authors, and not update for two or three weeks! tank u and Lex sonds shmexy (in me and my friends's language this is sexy, no confusions here i hope ^_^)
this story is really awesome! please say that you aren't going on a trip in early August, like some other authors, and not update for two or three weeks! tank u and Lex sonds shmexy (in me and my friends's language this is sexy, no confusions here i hope ^_^)
7/30/2006 c9
17witchwriter
I'm back! I made the guard pass out by choking him with that rope but he'll be fine. Unlike that Alexander who I would personally hunt down and kill- how do you think I should do it? Poison? Gun? Ah I'm crazy I'll think of something! And about that sundae, can I have just vanilla ice cream w/choco. fudge and melted pb pleez? (I'm a VERY picky eater.Seriously)Evil!

I'm back! I made the guard pass out by choking him with that rope but he'll be fine. Unlike that Alexander who I would personally hunt down and kill- how do you think I should do it? Poison? Gun? Ah I'm crazy I'll think of something! And about that sundae, can I have just vanilla ice cream w/choco. fudge and melted pb pleez? (I'm a VERY picky eater.Seriously)Evil!
7/30/2006 c9 Bob n Kazzi
More than twenty thousand babies Joe? My hips will be the size of a country by the end of it. Do you really want that?
I like this chapter. It gave a lot of information into the whys and hows of the previous few chapters, like why there was the tension between Lex and Alexander and their friends. Good job! Looking forward to the next installment.
More than twenty thousand babies Joe? My hips will be the size of a country by the end of it. Do you really want that?
I like this chapter. It gave a lot of information into the whys and hows of the previous few chapters, like why there was the tension between Lex and Alexander and their friends. Good job! Looking forward to the next installment.
7/30/2006 c8 NateBran
I absolutely love this story and I adore Lex. Rita is a great lead character, and her thoughts crack me up. I love it, update soon!
I absolutely love this story and I adore Lex. Rita is a great lead character, and her thoughts crack me up. I love it, update soon!
7/30/2006 c9
4Carina
This story is good. Very realistic characters. I hope Xander gets what is coming to him. You're doing a good job playing the raised culture against the cultural enviornment. Can't wait for the next chapter!

This story is good. Very realistic characters. I hope Xander gets what is coming to him. You're doing a good job playing the raised culture against the cultural enviornment. Can't wait for the next chapter!
7/30/2006 c9 Love Dune
Omgar, This is really good.
I feel bad since you don't have the time to write this and now I have to deal with this urge to read more.
I'm sure it'll go away sooner or later. @_@;
Anyway, I hope you update soon but on your own time, I guess, lawl.
Jealousy is funnish, Ilove teh mini spurts of jealousy in the chapter (well in the beginning...) more would be supasupa lurvable. :3
Thanksa for teh story~
Omgar, This is really good.
I feel bad since you don't have the time to write this and now I have to deal with this urge to read more.
I'm sure it'll go away sooner or later. @_@;
Anyway, I hope you update soon but on your own time, I guess, lawl.
Jealousy is funnish, Ilove teh mini spurts of jealousy in the chapter (well in the beginning...) more would be supasupa lurvable. :3
Thanksa for teh story~
7/30/2006 c9 Saniaaa
Wow! this chapter was really deep! poor tash! Alexander is such a bastard! gr8 job tho! keep it up. LOL thanks!
Wow! this chapter was really deep! poor tash! Alexander is such a bastard! gr8 job tho! keep it up. LOL thanks!
7/30/2006 c9
8stained innocence13
OH MY GOSH! seriously! you'll write me a part? but before dat... I SO HATE ALEXANDER! THAT DAMN ASS! argh! poor lex... now i get why he's so protective... who wudn't? i also get where rita's coming from... im a total people pleaser and if there's one ting i hate it's failing and letting people i love down... do update sooner! PLEASE!Here's my stats:Hair color: dark brown with natural red tips (noticeable under the light)skin tone: fair skinnedheight: 5'4.5weight: 104heritage: spanish and asianI'm actually pretty small boned, my friends say i have tiny wrists and i have almond shaped dark brown eyes. im a ballet dancer, long limbed, totaly into sports and academics. i love to act, sing, dance, read, write and bake. my character is totally up to you but just so you know im a devote roman catholic despite d fact that i have bad vices... my story name can be kris if you like since its d closest 2 my real name. thanks a bunch and do update sooner!

OH MY GOSH! seriously! you'll write me a part? but before dat... I SO HATE ALEXANDER! THAT DAMN ASS! argh! poor lex... now i get why he's so protective... who wudn't? i also get where rita's coming from... im a total people pleaser and if there's one ting i hate it's failing and letting people i love down... do update sooner! PLEASE!Here's my stats:Hair color: dark brown with natural red tips (noticeable under the light)skin tone: fair skinnedheight: 5'4.5weight: 104heritage: spanish and asianI'm actually pretty small boned, my friends say i have tiny wrists and i have almond shaped dark brown eyes. im a ballet dancer, long limbed, totaly into sports and academics. i love to act, sing, dance, read, write and bake. my character is totally up to you but just so you know im a devote roman catholic despite d fact that i have bad vices... my story name can be kris if you like since its d closest 2 my real name. thanks a bunch and do update sooner!
7/29/2006 c9 JuLez
ok its official, i love ur story and ur sense of humor its brilliant and i never used the word brilliant lol. yea the story is fantastic.
ok its official, i love ur story and ur sense of humor its brilliant and i never used the word brilliant lol. yea the story is fantastic.
7/29/2006 c9 JuLez
ok its official, i love ur story and ur sense of humor its brilliant and i never used the word brilliant lol. yea the story is fantastic.
ok its official, i love ur story and ur sense of humor its brilliant and i never used the word brilliant lol. yea the story is fantastic.