
8/13/2007 c11
4The Cheerio
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I'm glad you enjoyed the cookies!
Very funny chapter in my opinon. "Are you too good to fart?"
I just stopped there and laughed for like ten minutes straight.
Now, becaue you've asked i shall no longer cry.
But instead.
...eh. I'm not sure what i'll do!
Maybe eat a sandwhich...
Anyway! Update sonn!
...And i mean very very very very son. Like...in the next 2 minutes.

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I'm glad you enjoyed the cookies!
Very funny chapter in my opinon. "Are you too good to fart?"
I just stopped there and laughed for like ten minutes straight.
Now, becaue you've asked i shall no longer cry.
But instead.
...eh. I'm not sure what i'll do!
Maybe eat a sandwhich...
Anyway! Update sonn!
...And i mean very very very very son. Like...in the next 2 minutes.
8/11/2007 c11
2XxAmberRomancexX
OMG I LOVE PUPPIES! Lol.
I refuse to beleive that she was serious about that last line. We shall see. Funny as hell, as usual, and I love Sean! Me wants to steal him and put him in an art studio and keep him forever and ever and ever and ever...yeah. Lol. Yay for more developments! Can't wait for the next chapter.

OMG I LOVE PUPPIES! Lol.
I refuse to beleive that she was serious about that last line. We shall see. Funny as hell, as usual, and I love Sean! Me wants to steal him and put him in an art studio and keep him forever and ever and ever and ever...yeah. Lol. Yay for more developments! Can't wait for the next chapter.
8/11/2007 c11 SapphireEyes16
oh poor sean! tht is so typically asian! the eldest always has to carry on the family name, buisness and so on! but anywayz hope to see more of sean in the story update soon!
oh poor sean! tht is so typically asian! the eldest always has to carry on the family name, buisness and so on! but anywayz hope to see more of sean in the story update soon!
8/11/2007 c11 Saniaaa
Hey, I liked the last part of the chapter better. Probably cause it had Lex in it ;D I think you need to cut down on the rambling that Rita does. It's entertaining but it can get a bit boring. Rita's parents sound like cold-hearted bastards. And how many siblings does she have altogether? Anyway, Until next time x
Hey, I liked the last part of the chapter better. Probably cause it had Lex in it ;D I think you need to cut down on the rambling that Rita does. It's entertaining but it can get a bit boring. Rita's parents sound like cold-hearted bastards. And how many siblings does she have altogether? Anyway, Until next time x
8/11/2007 c11 Ravestna
this just keeps on getting better. Lex is the best.
the end of this chapter was so funny lol
Puppy. cos they look better than a doughnut
update soon
x X xRavestnax X x
this just keeps on getting better. Lex is the best.
the end of this chapter was so funny lol
Puppy. cos they look better than a doughnut
update soon
x X xRavestnax X x
8/10/2007 c11 Sexxxxxy
this story keep gettin better! I WANT AN UPDATE, PRONTO!
this story keep gettin better! I WANT AN UPDATE, PRONTO!
8/10/2007 c11
3RebelianAngel
I absolutely love your writing. At first I didn't like Lex, I thought that he needed his balls permanately remonved. But, now that I knew what he has been through I totally feel for him. Not to mention the fact that he is a totall hottie! I would have chosen him over Alexander even before I found out what he did to her. Ugh! I absolutely HATE him. He needs to die. He is an evil asshole that deserves to get his ass kicked. Can't wait until the next chapter!

I absolutely love your writing. At first I didn't like Lex, I thought that he needed his balls permanately remonved. But, now that I knew what he has been through I totally feel for him. Not to mention the fact that he is a totall hottie! I would have chosen him over Alexander even before I found out what he did to her. Ugh! I absolutely HATE him. He needs to die. He is an evil asshole that deserves to get his ass kicked. Can't wait until the next chapter!
8/10/2007 c11 Cathryne
I love this story so far..
I love the goth guy's attitude.
I love this story so far..
I love the goth guy's attitude.
8/8/2007 c11
17witchwriter
yah, new chappy. and no thanks I already have a puppy; he's 10 but he's still my little puppy and alays will be.
sincerely evil,w.w.
can't wait for the next one!

yah, new chappy. and no thanks I already have a puppy; he's 10 but he's still my little puppy and alays will be.
sincerely evil,w.w.
can't wait for the next one!