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11/15/2007 c1 11ending your life with one glar
hi i love your poetry keep writing
2/3/2007 c1 174a silenced revolution
I can feel the sadness in this one. Good job.
2/4/2005 c1 9Michael Gerard
Almost speechless. Fantastic! Keep going.
10/20/2004 c1 2philoslove
Woah, thought of a man trying to embrace his love who seems to be dead, or an empty shell, devoid of a soul. Powerful.
8/12/2004 c1 Melissa Lea Night
another haiku done well. you have a good knack for doing these. it's takara: queen of nightmares btw. been a while will, good to see you're going well as a writer.
8/5/2004 c1 9twilightwriter07
Short yet sad at the same time...well done.
7/30/2004 c1 David Stephen
These Haikus are simply sensational. They are very effective and work so well. Well done and keep on writing!
7/21/2004 c1 17Ravena Storm
I know my comment on 'Perish in Silence' wasn't exactly nice. Ok it wasn't nice at all but I was being honest which is what you asked people to do. I'm sorry I didn't say what was good about it but I didn't read enough of it to do so. That was a mistake on my part, I apologise for that. You are right to be hurt over it, people take comments differently. I didn't realise it would annoy you cuz I don't think it would bother me, but this isn't about me. Basically I'm saying sorry for how I said things. I could've been a lot nicer and subtle and added positive comments too. So yeah thats pretty much all I wanted to say.
About this piece though, it's nice. I rarely read Haiku (sp?) poems but I liked this one cuz it was simple but it held a lot inside it, especially with the present tenses on both the first and last lines as it shows how the speaker is almost holding onto memories rather than 'her'. Nice work =)
7/16/2004 c1 10Meleny
I'm starting to forget what I've reviewed:D
Anyways, good job I like it
-Lost
7/16/2004 c1 1Misha34
fuck u. At least i don't write filthy porn you sicko
7/16/2004 c1 Bob'N'Cat
Nice poem. I have to say you did a good job at bringing out the emotion in it.
7/15/2004 c1 4Neveah Snow
it's surprising how you can say so much with so little :)
7/11/2004 c1 292Fabian Cortez
powerful and impactive, perfecty rounded piece.
Well Done
Keep Writing!
F.C
7/7/2004 c1 vanburen
oh, wow. this was really very well done. your poetry skills are quite good.
7/7/2004 c1 22MorbidMan
Nice poem. Good job.
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