for Beauty7/6/2004 c1 Peiper
A few misspelled words, but oh well who cares. Kinda sad and happy, it was a very unique piece. Good Job.
A few misspelled words, but oh well who cares. Kinda sad and happy, it was a very unique piece. Good Job.
7/6/2004 c1 
24she's not breathing
totally true. people ARE beautiful when they cry. and it shows they're alive, too. nicely done with grasping that concept. =) great work. one little type, though. and in a short poem, those stand out. i'm just picky, hehe. don't listen to me. check out something i've written?
~k8
24she's not breathingtotally true. people ARE beautiful when they cry. and it shows they're alive, too. nicely done with grasping that concept. =) great work. one little type, though. and in a short poem, those stand out. i'm just picky, hehe. don't listen to me. check out something i've written?
~k8
7/6/2004 c1 30Roadside Dryer
Good, yes i think people are pretty when they cry, i always love that part in the movie when they do, so lovely and sad! Good job.
30Roadside DryerGood, yes i think people are pretty when they cry, i always love that part in the movie when they do, so lovely and sad! Good job.