for Blood Drops12/27/2004 c1 
121Wishdreamer89
hey Punkerella, I like this song. it has lots of feeling into it and not the fake cheesy stuff i usually see in songs and poems these days. good!
121Wishdreamer89hey Punkerella, I like this song. it has lots of feeling into it and not the fake cheesy stuff i usually see in songs and poems these days. good!
8/27/2004 c1 3Deornoth
I think that it is a very good song... I wish that I could hear it with the melody so I could critique it better, though. It sounds really neat when you read it out loud and it flows very nicely. Good job! ^-^
3DeornothI think that it is a very good song... I wish that I could hear it with the melody so I could critique it better, though. It sounds really neat when you read it out loud and it flows very nicely. Good job! ^-^
8/27/2004 c1 MurderCityAllStars
For a start, it's much better than any of my songs!
I especially love the line "crocodiles with endless smiless"
It puts an excellent image in my head.
Great job!
For a start, it's much better than any of my songs!
I especially love the line "crocodiles with endless smiless"
It puts an excellent image in my head.
Great job!