
6/22/2005 c4
10reader9641
i hope you up-date soon! i loove baseball stories and yours has such an intresting take on it all; being that its from the owners daughter. man what a life that must be..with all the baseball hotties! m

i hope you up-date soon! i loove baseball stories and yours has such an intresting take on it all; being that its from the owners daughter. man what a life that must be..with all the baseball hotties! m
5/26/2005 c4 becxfok01
Aww, I like this story! It seems really interesting and got loads of potential. Too bad you've given it up. If you ever pick up the story, pls email me!
Aww, I like this story! It seems really interesting and got loads of potential. Too bad you've given it up. If you ever pick up the story, pls email me!
11/29/2004 c4
2Akia Blakemore
I love it! Heh, Gabby's awesome and Bryce is a cutie! ;) Hehehehe.
Love it, aks.

I love it! Heh, Gabby's awesome and Bryce is a cutie! ;) Hehehehe.
Love it, aks.
10/4/2004 c4
8Night Lily
EEK! I love this story. Do you intend to update it? please do. i really want to hear more:)

EEK! I love this story. Do you intend to update it? please do. i really want to hear more:)
8/11/2004 c4
7vanderhall
another cute chapter. Bryce and Austin both sound really gorgeous, but I will admit that any guy who plays baseball is automatically hot in my book. hehe. but I liked Bryce the best. I'm glad Gabby picked him. and who is her favorite player? was she hinting that it would be him? if so, cute! ~V

another cute chapter. Bryce and Austin both sound really gorgeous, but I will admit that any guy who plays baseball is automatically hot in my book. hehe. but I liked Bryce the best. I'm glad Gabby picked him. and who is her favorite player? was she hinting that it would be him? if so, cute! ~V
8/9/2004 c4
5siham the archer
O... what's happening? Well I can't really think of anything to say except keep writing!

O... what's happening? Well I can't really think of anything to say except keep writing!
8/9/2004 c4
9Phoebe Love
I like Bryce! I like Bryce a lot! Oh, if I could find myself a Bryce, I would be so much happier. Good looking, has an attitude which means that he would pose a nice challenge, upfront and a baseball player, what more could you ask for? Oh, is their some machine where you can special order the man of your dreams? Update as Soon as Possible!
Feebs

I like Bryce! I like Bryce a lot! Oh, if I could find myself a Bryce, I would be so much happier. Good looking, has an attitude which means that he would pose a nice challenge, upfront and a baseball player, what more could you ask for? Oh, is their some machine where you can special order the man of your dreams? Update as Soon as Possible!
Feebs
8/3/2004 c3
5quiksilva brumby
This looks like a pretty cool start! I have no idea about baseball tho lol (i'm from Australia). You might want to watch your typos sometimes, but other than that it looks good!
Keep writing
luv ~brumby~ xx

This looks like a pretty cool start! I have no idea about baseball tho lol (i'm from Australia). You might want to watch your typos sometimes, but other than that it looks good!
Keep writing
luv ~brumby~ xx
8/2/2004 c3
7vanderhall
Good chapter. I love how Gabby ran out on her mother. I definitely would've, too. Update soon :)

Good chapter. I love how Gabby ran out on her mother. I definitely would've, too. Update soon :)
8/2/2004 c3
9Phoebe Love
Oh, I am so proud of Gabby! And I can't wait to hear hear logical explanation!
Feebs

Oh, I am so proud of Gabby! And I can't wait to hear hear logical explanation!
Feebs