for Losing7/6/2004 c1 Kingmike
OMG! I DONT CARE ABOUT YOUR POEM...ONCE I SAW "LOOSING" I STOPPED CARING.DOESN'T ENYONE KNOW THAT THERE IS ONE "O" IN L-O-S-I-N-G AND L-O-S-E THE OTHER IS LOOSE AS IN NOT TIGHT! WHY DOES NOBODY GET THIS?
FIX THIS...AS KING MIKE COMMANDS YOU!
OMG! I DONT CARE ABOUT YOUR POEM...ONCE I SAW "LOOSING" I STOPPED CARING.DOESN'T ENYONE KNOW THAT THERE IS ONE "O" IN L-O-S-I-N-G AND L-O-S-E THE OTHER IS LOOSE AS IN NOT TIGHT! WHY DOES NOBODY GET THIS?
FIX THIS...AS KING MIKE COMMANDS YOU!
7/6/2004 c1 Black Wolf of Death
Very good. It's a wonderful poem. I think it has much feeling in it. Sorry if I'm a little bad with my grammar. English is my seacond language. WEll very nice
Very good. It's a wonderful poem. I think it has much feeling in it. Sorry if I'm a little bad with my grammar. English is my seacond language. WEll very nice