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8/5/2004 c6 4pandagirl11
Thanks for all the reviews =P So now, I'm gonna return the favour =)
Chapter 1, Paragraph 2: "bush and she spotted a beautiful dove it." What does "dove it" mean?
Other than that...just a few spelling errors...and some parts are hard to understand. The story moves a bit fast but it's definitely a good one. Love the way you describe things 'cause it makes it very easy 2 picture in my head. Awesome story and if you have time, check out "The Search" and R&R =)
7/22/2004 c6 1x0x-Still-Alive-x0x
Hey i like this story! I think you should update! ^_^
~~*Nid*~~
7/8/2004 c4 4Neveah Snow
I likey... update soon
7/6/2004 c1 1dc squared
i forgot something. i really like the way the throne room looks. its awsome!
7/6/2004 c2 dc squared
This is Kat from dc squared. COOL BEANS! im really liking this story. some of it moves a lil fast. but its definantly good. update soon k? im lovin it. oh, you can check out our story too if you want to.

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