for Falling7/27/2004 c1 
54Clouden3
This is absolutely beautiful. I love your choice of words and the ending of this poem. Short, sweet and meaningful. Great job.
54Clouden3This is absolutely beautiful. I love your choice of words and the ending of this poem. Short, sweet and meaningful. Great job.
7/24/2004 c1 no one special
I didn't like this. You should try to work on endings and dig deeper to find a more intellectual finish. Thx 4 the reviews though.
I didn't like this. You should try to work on endings and dig deeper to find a more intellectual finish. Thx 4 the reviews though.
7/15/2004 c1 45Elena Katine
*grin* That was absolutely perfect. I like the format, although I can see how it would look better centered. I love the last four lines - "why call it falling? I'm / flying in love / with / you". Excellent job!
45Elena Katine*grin* That was absolutely perfect. I like the format, although I can see how it would look better centered. I love the last four lines - "why call it falling? I'm / flying in love / with / you". Excellent job!