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for The force of Daddy's Hatred

10/10/2004 c1 Snowy Black Owl
Oh, wow...that was just painful. GOOD, though!
8/7/2004 c1 Fate
0_0! This is seriously not based on our papa OK! NOT OUR PAPA!
8/7/2004 c1 148Dystorque
Terrible - that is, very well written, but creepy as hell. o.O
7/15/2004 c1 12Silken Silver Berries
wow. ...wow.
well, that sounds intelligent.
lol, man, what an awesome poem! scary stuff! jeez, scary what some people can do. awesome work, i loved the "push comes to shove/ bruise comes to break/ punishment comes to abuse" lines. man those were a piece of work. awesome stuff! happy thoughts! *hug* loves,
*ssb
7/14/2004 c1 16kaika switched
Hm, powerful piece. It's kind of creepy, and yet, more depressing than anything else. You write well. Keep it up!
7/8/2004 c1 49greenbanana
woah. scary. but in a good way

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