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9/4/2004 c1 32pointythings
This is really pretty. I like how you repeat "desperately divine." The rhyme scheme is really good too.
7/20/2004 c1 99underjoyed
This is really pretty. I love "temptation oozes fine addiction". That's a very sensual line, methinks.
The whole thing's very sensual, in fact, and I love the nature imagery.
7/7/2004 c1 11Enchant'd
Well, you wished for me to read this, so I did, and, I have to admit I love it. It's just simply awesome. The third stanza's my favourite, especially the first line in that stanza. Oh yes, your rhyming's very good too.
7/7/2004 c1 7Captain JT
Dear Megan,
Although I am already familiar with this one, I thought I might as well right a review, so you can have something in writing.
I did like this one, it was rather enjoyable. It seems a little obscure but the image that comes to mind is clear. Litterally, I imagine like the perfect photograph, colorful and vibrant. Unfortuately in still life is the only way I can imagine this world. It is too perfect for motion. I do like this, BUT I HATE the third stanza. Fix it, por favor. I really dont like it. Fine work though.
Jay

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