
7/20/2004 c1
13Duble-Helix
Oh, gave me chills. Strong imagery, I love the way you described everything. Great job, keep it up yeah. Peace ^_~

Oh, gave me chills. Strong imagery, I love the way you described everything. Great job, keep it up yeah. Peace ^_~
7/9/2004 c1 Jen
Dear Megan,
I agree with Jay. All though its not my favorite, its really imaginative.
Jen
Dear Megan,
I agree with Jay. All though its not my favorite, its really imaginative.
Jen
7/7/2004 c1
7Captain JT
Dear Megan,
Of all your poems I read thus far, I must say this is the best. Jam packed full of palpable imagery, this poem really stands out from your others. In essence, the entire piece is exquisit, and it really gives a creepy vibe. The ending line is flawless, and pulls together the entire concept. Despite the dreary image attempted to be cast, this was beautiful. To be quaint, I loved this one. You really did draw quite a picture with this one. Its definitely my favorite.
Jay

Dear Megan,
Of all your poems I read thus far, I must say this is the best. Jam packed full of palpable imagery, this poem really stands out from your others. In essence, the entire piece is exquisit, and it really gives a creepy vibe. The ending line is flawless, and pulls together the entire concept. Despite the dreary image attempted to be cast, this was beautiful. To be quaint, I loved this one. You really did draw quite a picture with this one. Its definitely my favorite.
Jay