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for Death in the Desert sonnet revised

9/4/2004 c1 32pointythings
This is really cool, except I think in the first line it would work better if you said "he" instead of "the man."
7/9/2004 c1 Jen
The way you captured suicide wasn't bad. Why you had the act take place in the desert, only you would know.
7/7/2004 c1 11Enchant'd
Hooray! No more edge with edge. This is much better.

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