
9/4/2004 c1
32pointythings
This is really cool, except I think in the first line it would work better if you said "he" instead of "the man."

This is really cool, except I think in the first line it would work better if you said "he" instead of "the man."
7/9/2004 c1 Jen
The way you captured suicide wasn't bad. Why you had the act take place in the desert, only you would know.
The way you captured suicide wasn't bad. Why you had the act take place in the desert, only you would know.